EXCERPT TIME WUT.

[pax_morgana]

SO I GOT BORED. AND WHEN I GET BORED, WRITING HAPPENS.

Title: The Crystal Room
Author: pax_morgana 
Rating: G (for now)
Summary: A science-fiction take on Morpheus of Greek mythology. Plot is very much unrefined. This is just what I have written so far.

Comments

[dollxposse]

Damn. Intense. I haven't read up on Morpheus, but I love the story here. Is this based on an actual dream you had, or is this purely from imagination? I would think that I would be uncomfortable in a dream like that - whiteness in excess tends to leave me feeling over-stimulated and panicky.

Makes me wanna find out more about this man, and to ask you to continue with the story. :)

[pax_morgana]

No, it's all from my imagination. And yeah, I know what you mean about the whiteness.

I'm definitely continuing it. Thanks so much~

[amaranthine_7]

You should get bored more often :P

I really like that excerpt and the introduction of those two characters. It raises so many questions and makes me want to read more of this story.

I hope you'll continue it and have a very clearer plot for it all soon :)

allis

[pax_morgana]

Aww, thank you dear. I'll add more as I write it.

If/when I finish it, I'll be publishing it as an ebook, after it's been edited and such.

[amaranthine_7]

That's good news :)

I hope you'll finish it someday, I'll be quite interested in reading it all from what this little excerpt introduced.

[pax_morgana]

Thank you! I'll be working on more today, so maybe I'll be adding more this evening. :3

[messiah_noire]

You had me hooked with the first sentence.
Your style flows so smoothly, I think it's rather beautiful. I'd definitely like to read more from you - and I wouldn't mind if it were a continuation of this short story. :) Because it's such an interesting topic, and I'm already a little in love with your Morpheus. ;)

[pax_morgana]

Thank you so much! This is definitely being continued; it is in no way finished.

Hahaha, I'm quite fond of my Morpheus. He's a keeper, that's for sure.