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A Pillowcase Correspondence - Letter 3

Nov 14, 2006 23:38

Title: A Pillowcase Correspondence
Authors: megyal and lesinnocents
Pairing: Patrick/Peter
Rating: PG-13 at the moment
Summary: Dear Patrick...
Disclaimer: 100% Disclaimed.
A/N: Alright, so it was 6.48 EST. Sorry, Marie.

Letter One
Letter Two
( Sincerely, Peter )

Comments 19

ricey11 November 15 2006, 06:43:22 UTC

I squealed when I saw this was updated from my sidekick.
I waited till I got home to read it.
Amazinnnggg.
You two have those two down solid.
And I'm all...*still can't think*
Much ♥

ricey11 November 15 2006, 06:43:56 UTC

I've never been the first post.
*giggles*
Yes I'm weird.

lesinnocents November 15 2006, 11:12:47 UTC

Speechless in Seattle, heh. I still can't believe that this story's been such a hit, or that people have genuinely liked it so much, and I'm worried that I sound too much like Pete, because... honestly? Who really wants to have the mentality of Pete Wentz? But I hope your thought patterns return to normal and... thank you!

nametags November 15 2006, 19:44:11 UTC

Now that the cycle had begun, it fit perfectly, just like he was sure his thigh would, sliding comfortably between Patrick’s and resting there while he slept.

That just...yeah

lesinnocents November 15 2006, 23:27:13 UTC

you're the second person to compliment that line, which I find funny, since I was skeptical about keeping it in there ^_^

(I still adore your icon every friggin' time I look at it)

nametags November 15 2006, 23:30:22 UTC

The image it produces (not just the oh they're laying tangled together) is a strong one, like Pete's vunerability and such

lesinnocents November 16 2006, 09:41:41 UTC

Well, they're not laying together, it's sort of pushing at the fact that even though Pete's just sitting across the room, the distance between him against that wall and him laying there with Patrick is miles and miles across desert. Does that make any sense? GUH. Damn me not making any sense. The point is - he's not on that couch, he's doomed to be the one awake at god-knows-when, watching.

yelovinyl November 16 2006, 00:04:25 UTC

Ooh! I was happy to see this updated. Interesting to see how this is headed.

Just wait for the stars in your eyes to fade (every light burns out eventually, only the stars engulf all of eternity in flame, tearing everything down with them as they die, and leave a lingering blackness in their wake) and you’ll end up looking back on this and wondering what the hell you were seeing all along.

I loved that.

lesinnocents November 16 2006, 09:42:58 UTC

^_^ Wow, honestly, you people are so fabulous to me. I'm getting you guys awesome Christmas presents. It makes me feel all fluttery to have my words shot back at me.

bestthingaround November 16 2006, 08:03:46 UTC

Gordian Knot. That’s what it’s called - the knot that was perfectly impossible to untie. Alexander took out his sword and split the knot in half, so it was declared that he was destined to rule Asia.

wow i just learned about that in class. That's amazing.

And this too. Amazing. So well written, I can't even begin to describe the love i have for it.
or maybe it's just 3 am. could be it.

lesinnocents November 16 2006, 09:39:07 UTC

Shhhh, nooo, do NOT blame it on the sleep deprivation, it makes me look like I write because of sleep deprivation and WE CAN'T LET THEM KNOW THAT I DO!

sorexsore November 18 2006, 02:29:12 UTC

*pets*...I feel like I have just been allowed to read something special and untarnished...okay- Kaci's been gone too long to make good comments. -___-

lesinnocents November 18 2006, 02:37:22 UTC

Awwwwf. You guys are all sweethearts.