Comments | paths_uncrossed: rain on my umbrella (some call it noise), Ilana, PG-13

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rain on my umbrella (some call it noise), Ilana, PG-13

Jul 27, 2010 09:15

Title: rain on my umbrella (some call it noise)
Fandom: LOST
Characters: Ilana, various
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 774
Summary: She's never needed a reason. (for the lovely weatheredlaw , who requested Inspired by Music at the lostsquee Luau)

( it's not a place i have to hide in )

pairing: ben/ilana, pairing: abaddon/ilana, character: ilana, character: jacob, verse: playing with matches, fanfic: lost

Comments 6

macey July 27 2010, 15:34:34 UTC

;; DEAR GOD I LOVE THIS. I love your Ilana. She's amazing and sweet and her emotions are so real. I can safely say weathered will adore this, ♥

flaky_artist July 28 2010, 02:18:54 UTC

Thanks so much, hun. I'm glad you liked Ilana here, she's one of my favorite people to write about. :)

weatheredlaw July 27 2010, 17:02:52 UTC

I'm just going to curl up with this story and die now, okay?

OMFG. Wow. I'm really glad you wrote this. It's so awesome. Thank you so so so so much.

In a rare moment of his own rebellion he threads dark fingers through her hair, offering to tell her about the man Jacob calls her father. She shakes her head.

I'm going to be who I want to be.

I love this line. It's so amazing. So Ilana.

And this line:

Across the road is a chirping sparrow of a girl, stick-thin legs and big eyes that remind her of a dream. She smiles and waves at Ilana.

The girl she used to be is the only person who's allowed to see her cry.

it makes me said. But it's gorgeous. <333333

And the little inclusion of Benana makes me want to scream with happiness. :))))

flaky_artist July 28 2010, 02:26:06 UTC

Eeh, so happy you like it! You're very welcome. :D I'm glad you like the line about the bird-girl, that turned out to be one of my favorite parts. I was super happy to write this for you. Thanks for your lovely words. <3

phoenixrising06 July 28 2010, 00:22:12 UTC

I'm sick as a dog today, otherwise you would be getting a paragraph or two about my love for this. I'm still bitter that we never got an official back story on Ilana and Jacob's relationship, but you do an excellent job of making up for it.

Incredible.

flaky_artist July 28 2010, 02:29:35 UTC

Aw, I hope you feel better soon.

Thanks so much! I think Ilana had a ton of potential for an interesting storyline, and I love exploring her possible backstory. Glad you liked it. :)