Comments | paths_uncrossed: fills my head up and gets louder (Ilana/Ben, PG-13)

flaky_artist in paths_uncrossed

fills my head up and gets louder (Ilana/Ben, PG-13)

Jun 15, 2010 18:46

Title: fills my head up and gets louder
Fandom: LOST
Characters: Ilana/Ben
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 630
Summary: There's nothing left. Ilana keeps fighting anyways. (for weatheredlaw , requested here.)

( better go and get your armor )

character: ben linus, pairing: ben/ilana, character: ilana, fanfic: lost

Comments 4

cloudytea June 16 2010, 00:57:04 UTC

You're awesome, you know that? Catheryn's (weatheredlaw) gonna love this, I think she's coming back from Hawaii tomorrow. This is seriously amazing.

flaky_artist June 16 2010, 03:42:55 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it. :)

weatheredlaw June 17 2010, 19:45:24 UTC

Oh. Oh oh oh oh oh. THIS. OMG.

First of all, your header right now. LOVE.

Second: This whole story. The way he just says her name and it brings her back, like it helps her understand that she's just as important as anyone else. And not just jacob's tool. That she is human. And the acknowledgement that Ben's a coward, how it saved her and she still doesn't understand or know how to appreciate it.

I won't let you go.

Ben's version of "I'll have you." maybe?

THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS.

flaky_artist June 19 2010, 02:45:49 UTC

YOU'RE WELCOME! I LOVED WRITING IT FOR YOU. :D

I'm really glad you like the name part. I liked the idea but wasn't sure it worked outside my head.

she's just as important as anyone else. And not just jacob's tool. That she is human.

Ohh, this exactly. It's like, she's so used to being treated as a means to an end that she's come to believe it of herself.