Jul 30, 2003 01:56
Yup I wrote a song today...
Thats my major accomplishment...
and ahh recently i have been meeting people like 6 to a day... and keeping in touch too... its awesome!!!
Well I will clean up my friends list and dleete those who just dont update or who i dont even talk to, or those who w/e... just making room and stuff... i however will need to catych up with my buddie's entries and such.. i mself havent comented or even read in a few days...
well here is the song i wrote...
tell me what you think:
“Darker Brown Specs “
What do you see when you look at me
Look in my eyes
Look in my eyes and tell me what you see
Do you see all the great and glory that will be me
You can just wait and see or take a look at me
Look at me now
What do you see
What do you see when you look at me
Do you see the same old pathetic boy still in love with you
Do you see me for the fool I was
all just because I loved you and did the things that now I’ll never do?
Or do you see the boy who you left to die
Said fuck the world and would cry
Try, try he did
But then again he was just a kid
See me as I am now, grown now
See me do what I couldn’t do, leave you
What do you see when you look at me
Look in my eyes
Look in my eyes and tell me what you see
Can you open your eyes and realize that I see your lies
I look into your eyes; I see your black soul, the hole
where your empty promises came from.
Your sick broken down kingdom.
Princess do you confess, will you protest to what you see
The beauty that is me and all my inner tranquility
What do you see when you look at me
Look in my eyes
Look in my eyes and tell me what you see
Can you see that I came out alive
Left you in the rearview …I put it in drive
Can you see I'm over all the hurt, pain, and the things you do
And all the hell you put me through
What do you see when you look at me
Look in my eyes
Look in my eyes and tell me what you see
What do you see when you look at me
Look in my eyes
Look in my eyes and tell me what you see
What do you see when you look at me?
Do you still see me as your toy?
A broken down boy that all night would weep?
Do you still see me as a pathetic creep?
Well take another look princess, your peasant has grown
The boy you left all alone, became a man, a king on his own
LOOK AT ME NOW! What do you really see, when you see me?
Look in my eyes
Look me in my eyes and tell what it is you see
Is it such a pain?
A tragedy to see, the reality of me?
Look in my eyes and tell me what you see
What do you see when you look at me
Do you see just a grown up old me, or do you see
How I’ve come to be
The great things you wanted to be
Have become me
-Ramon "Chilly" Doniak