Ah, I'm so glad you allow anonymous comments since I don't have a livejournal. I just wanted to say that I really loved this and that jinki's dragging want was threaded so well throughout the story, i could feel it myself ;____; or you know, maybe i just want taemin too lmao anyway, I hope you know what I meant, and thank you for all the things you write :'>
Ahhh this is so good I wanna read it all over again ;; Could totally see the dynamics and the way you wrote was so simple yet wonderful! The way Jinki would think about Taemin was so real I could almost believe that really happened when he was promoting hehe Thank you for writing this!
I'm crying - omg this is amazing... The way you use your words and structure everything is simple enough but holds a lot of extra meaning? I'm not sure if I'm writing this out the best way I can...
I was just reading through another fic of yours and I refreshed your profile and *poof* a new fic. Can I just say I love this so much? I love how you write this through Jinki's POV and how your characterizations are on-point, Kibum being Kibum, Jonghyun /poisoning/ Jinki except not rly but you know...and Minho trying to drag Jinki out (his fav hyung) so that Jinki doesn't stay at home all day and beat it...
Anywho, you're one of my absolute fav authors and there's just this way you write and the way you structure your words/sentences that make it speak volumes without all of this extra gunk words (like what I'm doing)
I'm really happy I got to read this - really made my night!<3
“If I did something like that, I’d probably have to run to church first thing tomorrow.”
“And why is that?” Jinki licks his lips.
“Because, father, I’m afraid I’m about to sin.”
Those last words were like a sucker punch. Umpfh! I loved it. Jinki's desperation. Taemin's determination and .fklnsdfmnskl just everything. This was wonderful. Thanks for writing and sharing.
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I just wanted to say that I really loved this and that jinki's dragging want was threaded so well throughout the story, i could feel it myself ;____;
or you know, maybe i just want taemin too lmao
anyway, I hope you know what I meant, and thank you for all the things you write :'>
Fatimah.
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Thank you for writing this!
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The way you use your words and structure everything is simple enough but holds a lot of extra meaning? I'm not sure if I'm writing this out the best way I can...
I was just reading through another fic of yours and I refreshed your profile and *poof* a new fic. Can I just say I love this so much? I love how you write this through Jinki's POV and how your characterizations are on-point, Kibum being Kibum, Jonghyun /poisoning/ Jinki except not rly but you know...and Minho trying to drag Jinki out (his fav hyung) so that Jinki doesn't stay at home all day and beat it...
Anywho, you're one of my absolute fav authors and there's just this way you write and the way you structure your words/sentences that make it speak volumes without all of this extra gunk words (like what I'm doing)
I'm really happy I got to read this - really made my night!<3
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“And why is that?” Jinki licks his lips.
“Because, father, I’m afraid I’m about to sin.”
Those last words were like a sucker punch. Umpfh! I loved it. Jinki's desperation. Taemin's determination and .fklnsdfmnskl just everything. This was wonderful. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Xx L xX
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