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Apr 27, 2010 20:03

Your medicine made me sick
I got fever and nausea and sores on my dick
and I thought I'd feel better once I'd worn your pink sweater
but I tried and I still feel like shit.

And this loneliness won't go away
and the hookers won't take it no matter how much I'd pay
cause they know something's wrong with my soul and my dong
I beg 'em but here's what they say:

(chorus)
Honey, you gotta
take care of yourself
before you fuck
with somebody else
I know it's hard
when you've got this wealth
of love to share
but think of my health
you must be aware
that no one can bear
your share of the pain
they'll end up insane
and you'll feel the same
so before you fuck
with somebody else,
honey, take care
take care of yourself.

***
I dunno if it's going anywhere.  I need some chick with soul to sing the chorus. And also I need to figure out where it's going from here.

Still, I like it so far. It's got misery as a euphemism for an STD as a symbol for misery. It's layered. Like an ogre.
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