[2pm | 001.] a nighttime calling - 1/1

Jun 25, 2010 14:16

a nighttime calling
nichkhun/wooyoung
pg-13
[in sum]: wooyoung's mind works with clarity at nighttime.
thanks to: nomnomnishi for beta-ing and giving me tips :)
prompt from milkpoet :
There is no sense in loving someone you can never wake up to except by chance.

-- Jeanette Winterson, The Passion

...tempted to try and touch, )

2pm, ☆ nichkhun/wooyoung

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peachmacaroons June 25 2010, 21:46:18 UTC
it was, at best, painful.

a short line, but it grabbed at my attention, especially with the Sisyphus reference. this is really well written, and you convey wooyoung's line of being calm and collected when doing menial tasks, and then his very subtle chaotic struggle to want something he can't have in a way that's not forced and real.

you know what, that doesn't even make sense.

this is a really amazing piece, and the shipper in me pretends khun came out bc he cares.

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mouthings June 25 2010, 21:58:47 UTC
you made perfect sense to me :D

thank you so much for reading and leaving such a lovely comment. it really encourages me to write more X)

the khunwoo lover in me wants khun to care too. X)

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mouthings June 25 2010, 22:38:07 UTC
oh, a first timer eh? welcome :) to the world of 2pm :P

i haven't written any other 2pm fics though. this is only my second fanfic over all :)

thank you so much for reading and leaving a comment! X)

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mouthings June 26 2010, 05:39:14 UTC
oh! i love cyril wong. :) his poems are awesome X)

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mouthings June 26 2010, 05:39:33 UTC
why thank ya kindly ma'am ;)

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devilslover422 June 26 2010, 02:01:34 UTC
this was great!!
it was sooo well written and for it to be so short, u definitely conveyed a lot!!!

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mouthings June 26 2010, 05:40:11 UTC
thank you for that lovely comment :)
i have my wonderful beta to thank for the grammar and bits X)

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this was so beautiful howla June 27 2010, 03:41:21 UTC
Re: this was so beautiful mouthings July 5 2010, 22:25:22 UTC
late reply! :(
but thank you so much for commenting.
:)

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