Ha, well that's good to here. It's definately an incentive to keep writing.
Glad the lindsay/cindy talk worked. It's such a tenuous line they're treading right now I really wanted to try and make that come across and still keep it in character.
There were so many cute and interesting scenes that it's hard to point to one and say it was my favourite, but I really enjoyed Claire and Lindsay's talk, as well as Tom and Jill's. And I always appreciate more Jill and Cindy time.
I'm also really enjoying the extra back-story you've given Sam (are you planning on a follow up to 'Just a Little Insight'?) and the prospect of Brooke's visit.
All in all, I'm really enjoying the story.
(This is for parts 4 & 5 as I somehow missed part 4 when you posted)
No plans on a follow up yet. I've been a bad girl, and shouldn't even be really doing fan fic, but I've got this going and an All My Children Bam fic that I'm playing wish, on top of my other stuff so...
I need to be a good girl and wean off the fan fic.
But damn if you didn't just put an idea in my head.
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Glad the lindsay/cindy talk worked. It's such a tenuous line they're treading right now I really wanted to try and make that come across and still keep it in character.
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Another excellent section. You have me utterly hooked.
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Sweeet.
I aim and try to keep you that way. You're mine now! *evil laugh*
More Jill/Cindy from you? Soon? :-D
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Hehe! I'll see what I can do. :-)
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I love how everybody finds Ashe so creepy.
There were so many cute and interesting scenes that it's hard to point to one and say it was my favourite, but I really enjoyed Claire and Lindsay's talk, as well as Tom and Jill's. And I always appreciate more Jill and Cindy time.
I'm also really enjoying the extra back-story you've given Sam (are you planning on a follow up to 'Just a Little Insight'?) and the prospect of Brooke's visit.
All in all, I'm really enjoying the story.
(This is for parts 4 & 5 as I somehow missed part 4 when you posted)
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I need to be a good girl and wean off the fan fic.
But damn if you didn't just put an idea in my head.
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I prefer to think of them as commercial breaks, thank you very much. ;-)
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