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FIC: Shelter From The Storm [TSCC; Sarah/Cameron]

Feb 27, 2008 12:00

Title: Shelter From The Storm
Fandom: Sarah Connor Chronicles
Pairing: Sarah/Cameron
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2781
Summary: Sarah can't help it if she has nightmares.

( If the machines were mimicking humans, they were doing a damn good job of it )

fic, sarah connor chronicles

Comments 13

ralst February 27 2008, 20:30:18 UTC

Very nice. I really liked Sarah's wariness and how she's discomforted by her own comfort with the situation. That whole dichotomy between what she's taught herself to feel, in order to survive, and what she is reluctantly starting to feel.

I'd love to see how else Cameron goes about earning Sarah's trust... so, any chance of a sequel or series?

trancer21 March 1 2008, 07:06:28 UTC

That whole dichotomy between what she's taught herself to feel, in order to survive, and what she is reluctantly starting to feel.

Yes. For Sarah, trusting Cameron started the moment John was in danger and Sarah wasn't there to protect him. She hates herself because it wasn't her. She hates that it was Cameron. And yet, she's forever in debt to the very thing she's supposed to hate. Which opens the door to Sarah's trust and her willingness/ability to trust Cameron. It won't be easy, but it's not a lost cause.

shatterpath February 28 2008, 01:56:40 UTC

I agree with Ralst. This is a great portrayal at how unnerved Sarah would be with these feelings and the ease of her sleep. I was glued to it!

trancer21 March 2 2008, 04:54:59 UTC

Thanks. I love that dichotomy within Sarah. How, no matter how hard she tries, she can't help being 'human' when it comes to Cameron.

harper_m February 28 2008, 03:55:28 UTC

“I don't want to be in your nightmares anymore.”

that was my favorite part. i like the notion of cameron actively trying to win sarah's trust. that'll be a hard fought battle, i'm sure.

trancer21 March 2 2008, 05:05:24 UTC

Definitely a hard fought battle. I don't think Sarah will ever trust anyone but John completely. But one Cameron's already on the right track to being number 2.

calliopes_muse February 28 2008, 03:57:31 UTC

Excellent insight into Sarah! I hope there will be a continuation. I would love to see how Cam wins her trust (and her heart!).

badtyler February 28 2008, 04:58:00 UTC

I really enjoyed this. I was disappointed that it had to end, but you stopped right when you should have--making all of us want more!

*swoon*
*g*