Fic: All I Ever Wanted (CM: JJ/Emily) (5/7)

[tabfan19]

Title: All I Ever Wanted (5/7

Comments

[gigi2690]

*in physical pain* gah! Please make it better and update soon! *becomes speechless...mouth gaping*
gigi

[tabfan19]

I'll update soon, but it's up to JJ to make it better... :)

[djshiva]

OMG update soon plzzzzz!

really dig this story, although this chapter is making me sad.

[tabfan19]

thanks - glad you like the story, this chapter notwithstanding. :)

[tehdoombunny]

But...
why...
and...
gaah!

No fighting...:(

[tabfan19]

Uh oh, no words can't be good. :)

[anonymous]

Augghhh!! Fix it, fix it quick! Making up is the best part, hurry up and let 'em get on with it! ;)

[calliopes_muse]

That was me! Dang it!

[tabfan19]

I just hope JJ comes to her senses! :)

[atfm]

What an intense chapter. First, I liked how you showed JJ's doubts because that's how it goes - you get a few facts (that may not even be true), you construct a whole story around them inside your head and drive yourself crazy with not wanting to believe it and thinking you have to. She wants so badly to believe it's not true, but there's the logic...it's brain versus heart. That came across very well.

And secondly, I liked how you portrayed Emily as having dared to step out from behind her professional mask, only to now find she has nowhere else to go than back behind it, at least with regard to JJ. It's quite sad how each of them has her own personal struggle when all they want is to be together.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

[tabfan19]

Thanks for the comments -- always great to hear what people think is working.