Once Upon a Dream 48a/?

May 23, 2011 21:11

Title: Once Upon a Dream 48a ( Read more... )

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bsofthewest May 24 2011, 15:12:36 UTC
I love the way you write! More later.

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kelinswriter May 24 2011, 15:53:38 UTC
Thanks! I look forward to your "more" later. :)

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bsofthewest May 30 2011, 13:15:08 UTC
How well you capture the joy of hanging out at the bow of a sailboat. Brought back some mems, I'll tell you. Pick that up in your youth or did you crew Bare Boat? Perfect. Olivia seeing Natalia is going to happen a lot, I suspect. They both need the connection.
I love that magical link.
I love to think about the strength of her Father and that of Mano. Somewhere in her life she learned a type of male power.
And I can hardly contain my joy at the prospect of what Mother Isabelle will bring!
Let the wild rumpus begin!

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kelinswriter May 30 2011, 17:46:46 UTC
How well you capture the joy of hanging out at the bow of a sailboat. Brought back some mems, I'll tell you. Pick that up in your youth or did you crew Bare Boat? Perfect.

I have no idea what "Bare Boat" is, but I grew up on a lake and spent a lot of time on boats. They're in my blood.

Olivia seeing Natalia is going to happen a lot, I suspect. They both need the connection.
I love that magical link.

Natalia is never far from Olivia's mind.

I love to think about the strength of her Father and that of Mano. Somewhere in her life she learned a type of male power.

I've done a lot of pondering on Olivia's daddy issues, and how, in many ways, they're the root cause of her mommy issues. Losing her dad young affected her deeply, no question.

And I can hardly contain my joy at the prospect of what Mother Isabelle will bring!
Let the wild rumpus begin!

There's going to be some wild times on the island before this is over.

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kelinswriter May 28 2011, 17:59:06 UTC
Yes, Olivia concentrate on that image of Natalia. Think of that and that alone! Also, after Olivia saw Ty up on that cliff I totally pictured Natalia doing the same for Olivia.

It's pretty clear that Natalia is never far from Olivia's mind. If Mano hadn't distracted her, I think she would have had lots more thoughts about what their vacation would be like. :)

I would agree, Natalia would watch for Olivia's ship coming in and stand on the cliffs, all romantic like, just to give her that first welcome home. And I bet there'd be one helluva dinner waiting for her as well.

*sigh* What are the chances Olivia will actually get that antidote that easily? Yeah, pretty small, but I still can hope, can't I?

It'll be a walk in the park. Smooth sailing. Easy as pie. Really.

Awesome chapter!!

Thank you! :)

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wkgreen May 24 2011, 19:46:57 UTC
A nice reprieve before the action heats up again. :)

Waiting for more :)

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kelinswriter May 25 2011, 05:56:02 UTC
Olivia needed that little respite.

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jojolemon June 12 2011, 14:57:50 UTC
I agree that it's nice to have a bit of calm here. Things were so hectic in Springfield. Looking forward to more.

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kelinswriter June 12 2011, 17:27:16 UTC
They were overdue for a chance to catch their breaths. I think Olivia in particular needed it to prepare herself for the challenges ahead.

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