Fic: Sometimes all you need is a change of prespective 5/? | Pushing Daisies - Olive/Chuck | PG

[theflyingshadow]

Author: Shadower
Title: Sometimes all you need is a change of perspective
Disclaimer:  ABC owns it all. I own nothing.
Fandom: Pushing Daisies - Olive / Chuck
Rating: sort of R - for the series.
Archiving: I keep forgetting to add this line... Ralst can have all the chapters for P&P, anyone else needs to ask.
Summary: Olive's attempt to put thoughts of

Comments

[theflyingshadow]

I noticed she sucked at lying while watching corpcicle, it manages to solve so many pesky problems for this chapter ^_^

I think my muse is comeing around to see things my way, but I'll only know for sure when I sit down to write...

[shaych_03]

this just keeps getting better :) you're still in "voice" which makes the story just that much more enjoyable... i love how everyone has their own reactions toward olive's abilities with the horse... it sort of encapsulates how they each feel about her as well :)

can't wait to see what happens next :)

[theflyingshadow]

Thank you! At first I thought I'd kind of lost "the voice" in this chapter but if you say I didn't I'll take your word for it, lean back and smile.

Showing each of their feelings towards her was actually the plan in this scene, since if you look plot-advancement wise not a lot happens. But this is still important for a full (rich?) story in my eyes. I think I see more of JJJ in the future, though if he comes in my muse will probably insist I complicate things and I can never resist her (unless I think she's wrong). ::shrug::
Breakfast, here I come!

[shaych_03]

sometimes it's not plot advancement you need, but plot expanding...

especially since olive is working herself into becoming a bridge between the need for charlotte to have something to touch and olive's need to love and be loved...

[theflyingshadow]

sometimes it's not plot advancement you need, but plot expanding... exactly!

Is that really what you think about Olive in this story? Hmmmm... I think you managed to provide me with something to think about next time I'm bored during class (i.e - in two hours).