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Afterworld: Into the Arms of Darkness Ch.13

Sep 16, 2010 14:49

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yesss zadi8 September 16 2010, 23:41:31 UTC

i can breathe now. man, o man... i'm glad thats over. lol. that previous chapter took a lot out of me. ok, now what? much needed, uneasy, bonding time? :) Whats Nat got to eat in that joint??

Re: yesss altfic September 17 2010, 05:31:10 UTC

lol. Breathing is good...and probably a bit of breathing room too. Hopefully, things should calm down a bit...even if there are still some very nasty...er...possibilities on the horizon. As for what Nat has to eat...pbnj of course. The perfect food for any kind of Apocalypse. lol.

Re: yesss zadi8 September 17 2010, 07:39:03 UTC

please... let those possibilities be on the far off horizon. please. **cheesy smile** pbnj?? i guess that works, if you got gin, maybe wine to wash it down with. now we're talking bout the perfect food for the Apocalypse. Strictly because, you know, they keep for years. :)

stinker_1 September 17 2010, 02:27:16 UTC

Awww now thats more like it....Jellybean to the rescue...I will admit I got a little teary eyed reading that. Great update!

altfic September 17 2010, 05:50:06 UTC

Have no fear, Jellybean is here. lol.

Is it bad that I'm glad people got a bit teary-eyed? I know I got a lump in my throat writing some of this, so I guess I'm relieved it's touching others in some way.

Thanks for writing. :)

wkgreen September 17 2010, 05:38:53 UTC

EMMA for the WIN!!! Emma is going to rise up to gather the humans and defeat the zombies in the future!

Waiting for more! :)

altfic September 17 2010, 06:13:48 UTC

I wouldn't bet against her, that's for sure. lol.

Thanks for writing. :)

zephyr_tempest September 17 2010, 09:11:05 UTC

Emma is suck a freaking adorable little Jellybean!! I love how you have the adults fighting, and not expressing how they feel or their motivations, and then you have Emma come in and in her adorable 'innocent' way fix everything. That's totally what happens. And we think kids are silly...ha.

Fantastic chapter. Can't wait til the next one.

altfic September 18 2010, 03:15:24 UTC

Jellybean is the game-changer...the one who gets them to be their best selves rather than their worst. She's what humanizes them and in this world that's desperately needed.

Hopefully posting in the next little while. Thanks for writing. :)

triggerhappy September 17 2010, 19:09:52 UTC

When someone commented/you replied (can't remember which) that someone more mature than Olivia and Natalia was going to have to calm things down, knew it'd be Emma. It made me giggle a bit. Little Loveglue was gonna be at it again!

But damn. I had no idea it was gonna make me cry like this.
And think I was wrong about the last chapter being the hardest to read - Emma gentling and then comforting Olivia was just...it broke me, a little. *sniffles*

altfic September 18 2010, 03:50:55 UTC

LOL! I figured that would clue folks in. Emma's job is to make her mommies see the truth...and she does it well.

It's funny. I can't remember having people tell me something I wrote made them cry before...but this one seems to have gotten to several folks. Weird feeling, but I hope it's all in a good sense.

Anyhoo, thanks for writing. T'is much appreciated. :)