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Afterworld: Into the Arms of Darkness Ch.11

Sep 13, 2010 13:56

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guiding light

Comments 11

wkgreen September 13 2010, 23:31:47 UTC

Yes, it would be hard to trust in that situation.

Nice move Olivia!

Waiting for more! :)

altfic September 14 2010, 09:44:05 UTC

Olivia doesn't do trust at the best of times...and this is far from the best of times.

She does, however, apparently watch wrestling. lol.

Thanks for writing:)

hold on here... zadi8 September 14 2010, 01:00:52 UTC

be cool, be cool... :) lets everybody try to be cool here. Nat did take it a bit far not letting Liv see Emma. It can be a bitch of a time trying to get Liv to do what she doesn't want to do. It's weird seeing them like this...literally fighting. Can't wait till they're at least amicable. Till then, be cool ladies! no knife fights!

Re: hold on here... altfic September 14 2010, 09:49:04 UTC

LOL! They really will get past the knife fights point...fairly soon even...they're still just very focused on getting their own way, and so not listening to each other.

What a great story! cherokeenight September 14 2010, 02:38:01 UTC

Just wanted to thank you for writing such a great story! They're fighting, literally, every step of the way here. You're not giving an inch for free, and I appreciate it. No easy ways out, no trite cliches. Thank you so much!

Re: What a great story! altfic September 14 2010, 09:51:36 UTC

So glad to hear you're enjoying. HOnestly, I didn't really expect much of a positive response, but folks seem to be having fun with the concept.

As for the no easy ways out...probably gonna stay that way. Oh, they'll work some things out, but this isn't a world where things ever get easy.

Thanks for taking the time to write.

ndasky1 September 14 2010, 04:33:21 UTC

Ouch! Poor Natalia, though I get Olivia being worried about Emma.

Ladies, deep breaths, no hasty moves please...

altfic September 14 2010, 09:58:01 UTC

Not Natalia's best day...no. Not Olivia's either, for that matter.

As for the deep breathing and hasty moves...hang on ladies, we're in for a bumpy ride.

Thanks for writing. :)

stinker_1 September 14 2010, 07:11:48 UTC

wow...friends should not attack friends with knives....i hope they get on better ground soon. Great chapter.

altfic September 14 2010, 09:59:37 UTC

Things will ease up soon...though it's probably gonna take a bit to shock them out of the current bout of...issues.

Thanks for writing.