Comments | passion_perfect: Afterworld: Into the Arms of Darkness Ch.10

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Afterworld: Into the Arms of Darkness Ch.10

Sep 12, 2010 13:38

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stinker_1 September 13 2010, 00:59:27 UTC

I literally yelled YAY! when I saw the update. Good stuff keep her coming.

altfic September 13 2010, 22:08:01 UTC

Good to hear it got a yay! Hopefully that trend will continue. :)

melanacious September 13 2010, 04:36:25 UTC

Aww shucks. I've been waiting for this story since you posted that very first rendering of the Poster for it. And now --I'm a bad, bad fan-- got to chapter 10 without even mentioning how much I love this story.

Sorry. But, yes I do love it.

altfic September 13 2010, 22:27:04 UTC

Hey, I'll take comments and feedback any time I can get them. :)

Good to hear you enjoyed the artwork and are having fun with the story. :)

Thanks for writing.

ndasky1 September 13 2010, 04:52:22 UTC

Hmm, Olivia's still trying to push Natalia's boundaries.

I think that Emma will definitely be the glue pulling them together, should be very interesting. :o)

altfic September 13 2010, 22:45:47 UTC

Olivia's always going to be pushing the envelope, I think. It's just who she is.

Emma is very likely to be a very big part of their making peace with each other.

Thanks for writing. :)

wkgreen September 13 2010, 05:45:16 UTC

Ooo... Olivia scored a point. Now all that she needs to do is realize that Natalia could be a good ally! Natalia needs to realize that about Olivia too.

Waiting for more! :)

altfic September 13 2010, 23:19:46 UTC

They both need to realize they have possible allies in each other...but it can be hard to let go of your suspicions when they've gotten you this far in a dangerous situation. When even the tiniest error can end a person up dead, it's really hard to ease off and trust.

Thanks for writing. :)

zephyr_tempest September 13 2010, 09:09:00 UTC

*wimpers* Poor Olivia. I'd almost be inclined to shoot myself, just in case.

Love the slow introduction of an underlying attraction between them.

Can't wait til the next update.

altfic September 13 2010, 23:42:26 UTC

You and me both, but Olivia's a survivor, plus she has Emma to consider. No matter what, she's not really allowed to give up under those circumstances.

There's definitely chemistry there, even if at the moment, it's not so positive. They're working on it.

zephyr_tempest September 14 2010, 00:23:19 UTC

...that's where the almost came in. Without Emma it'd be a definate.

And knowing you, the ride will be amazing. ;)