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snuffnyc in passion_perfect

FIC: The Lost

Dec 19, 2009 18:57

Title: The Lost
Fandom: Guiding Light
Pairing: Olivia/Natalia
Rating: R to NC-17

Notes: PLEASE READ This is a dark, angst-filled story with ADULT themes. It is not graphically violent or gratuitous in nature, but it can be quite dark. For those of you who read and enjoyed "Whatever It Takes," this story takes place shortly after. Completely different ( Read more... )

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Comments 27

sinjenkai December 20 2009, 00:13:01 UTC

Oh please get her out of those clothes

bsofthewest December 20 2009, 00:51:03 UTC

What she said!

bsofthewest December 20 2009, 00:17:43 UTC

I sooooo love this story.
"There was something so peaceful, so comforting about the sound of her lover's breaths, deep and even. It wasn't until she felt Natalia's lips on her own that she even realized she'd fallen asleep." This struck me as perfect.

keagand December 20 2009, 00:21:09 UTC

Loved this update...really like how Pierce fits into the Spencer-Rivera family. Loved the conversations about Natalia noticing women and the conversation about imagining what Isabella would be like and being ready for a new baby. Wish this little story would go on forever!

infernoweaver December 20 2009, 01:08:37 UTC

"Wish this little story would go on forever!"

I included this very thought on my letter to santa. I hope he delivers! :D

cscgirl3 December 20 2009, 00:28:33 UTC

wow....what a sensual sexy ending of a chapter. i have no other words... except, i love this story and thank you!!!

snuffnyc December 20 2009, 04:20:32 UTC

and i wanna make out with your icon. threesome!!!

mudpiegirl December 20 2009, 01:28:51 UTC

I love this story! Liked Natalia's rememberance of crushing on her teacher. Natalia's history, the 18 years of abstinence, et al, certainly leaves a wide open door for this type of interpretation, that maybe she's not just gay for Olivia ( ... )

snuffnyc December 20 2009, 04:34:02 UTC

Thanks for the feedback... Yes, I'm glad the Pierce/Olivia/Natalia dynamic does feel familial. It is indeed supposed to. The flirting is just, as Olivia lamented last chapter, Pierce being Pierce. She can't help it. (Probably a defense mechanism or some shit... lol) I wanted a new character to fulfill a number of different roles, besides being the obvious vehicle for Olivia's growth/journey, plus the story would get a tad boring from here on out if it was just la la la perfectland, with nobody playing the comic foil or bringing anything interesting to the table. So now we have Pierce, and her fucked up ol' past, and we'll see if she can help keep it spicy for a bit ( ... )