Comments | passion_perfect: fic: I Know You Love Me, Chapter Two

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fic: I Know You Love Me, Chapter Two

Nov 02, 2009 15:51

( I Know You Love Me, Chapter Two )

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mysticaldream November 3 2009, 21:02:07 UTC

Wow, what an amazing compliment! Thank you so much!

tanama30 November 3 2009, 00:58:36 UTC

nice update to this story. i can't wait for more update soon

mysticaldream November 3 2009, 21:02:49 UTC

Thank you so much - Chapter 3 will be up in a couple of minutes.

zephyr_tempest November 3 2009, 03:03:44 UTC

Olivia, you have no idea what you're in for. >_<

Fantastic continuation of the beautiful story arc you started in the first chapter. Lovely characterisation. I adore the flashback. Glad to see other favourites showing up too - Josh is definately one of those right now.

Eagerly anticipating the next installment. :D

mysticaldream November 3 2009, 21:04:27 UTC

Be afraid, Olivia, be very afraid. :)

Thank you for the lovely compliment. It means so much to me that you've taken the time to comment. I hope you continue to like it.

perpetualblyss November 3 2009, 05:20:53 UTC

Really compelling stuff here. I like how you are weaving canon into your story. Also I think that Natalia would be more threatened by Josh. Olivia has tried to get together with Josh a bunch of times in canon. Even with Josh being helpful and telling Natalia to look into Olivia's past, Olivia sharing her feeling with Josh (let alone physical intimacy while Natalia was gone) has got to have her feeling jealous.

mysticaldream November 3 2009, 21:07:12 UTC

Thank you for taking the time to comment and also for telling me what you didn't find believable. At this point the Natalia in this story doesn't know what Olivia was up to with Josh while she was away. I have a conversation planned for a few chapters out where she finds out. Hopefully that and her reaction will make things seem more realistic to you.

tenwinterz November 3 2009, 14:20:47 UTC

Update WIN! I really enjoyed this installment.
I love being inside Natalia's head. And you're
writing her thoughts just beautifully. Well done.
I can't wait for more! :)

mysticaldream November 3 2009, 21:09:04 UTC

I can't tell you how much I appreciate your comment, because the entire time I was writing this I felt like I just couldn't get a handle on Natalia's mind - Olivia seems to be so much easier to write for! Natalia was always so reserved with her thoughts and feelings that you really had no idea what was going on in her mind.

Thank you for taking the time to comment, I sincerely appreciate it.