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I Know You Love Me, Chapter One

Nov 01, 2009 17:56

Title: I Know You Love Me
Author: mysticaldream
Fandom: Guiding Light
Pairing: Olivia Spencer/Natalia Rivera

Spoilers: This story begins at the end of the 8/31/2009 episode and includes flashbacks/references to earlier scenes, both canon and fictitious. This story will deviate from canon at the end of the 8/31/2009 episode.

Summary: Natalia pursues ( Read more... )

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Comments 16

ceridwyn2 November 1 2009, 23:39:45 UTC

Interesting reading Olivia's thoughts behind that thoroughly bad dinner date with Matt. Looking forward to where you take this.

mysticaldream November 3 2009, 21:19:50 UTC

Thank you for taking the time to comment. I never understood why, with all the men in Springfield, she called Matt for a date - it seems like they had so little in common!

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mysticaldream November 2 2009, 01:12:16 UTC

Thank you - I didn't realize it had posted in all bold. I think I've got it fixed.

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jennjenn30 November 2 2009, 02:47:00 UTC

I really enjoyed this chapter and I think you did a terrific job for this being your first fic!!! I look forward to the next chapter.

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bsofthewest November 2 2009, 03:02:32 UTC

Loved this:
“Ohhh,” she responded, slightly annoyed though she couldn’t exactly pinpoint why. Was it because he seemed so genuinely content while she was barely holding her sanity together?"
Look forward to Natalia showing up and crashing this sham date!!!

mysticaldream November 3 2009, 21:21:19 UTC

Isn't it just like Olivia to get mad when someone is happy and she isn't? Thank you for commenting. And I LOVE your icon!

bsofthewest November 3 2009, 21:55:50 UTC

Thanks for the icon love. My idea, executed by the incomparable Tam.

th0u_art_that November 2 2009, 06:18:58 UTC

Incredibly well-written. You just revealed to me the true brilliance of that "accidental first date" scene. Good stuff, looking forward to more!

mysticaldream November 3 2009, 21:22:40 UTC

Wow, what a compliment. Thank you so much!

ttandme69 November 2 2009, 13:39:50 UTC

Great first fan fic...great first chapter. I cannot wait to see where this is going...I love the way you tell what is going on in Olivia's mind! I cannot wait for Natalia to show up and crash this "date!" Thanks, Lisa

mysticaldream November 3 2009, 21:23:56 UTC

Thank you for reading, Lisa! Writing Olivia's thoughts is quite a bit of fun because she was so beautifully sarcastic!