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GL - Movie Night - Part 41

Oct 31, 2009 20:48

Title: Movie Night
Author: critic2000
Pairing: Olivia/Natalia
Rating: PG-13 to start, for violence (non-sexual) and language. I am not any kind of a medical expert so if there are some glaring errors, please forgive me.
Disclaimer: I don’t own the Guiding Light characters, they belong to CBS and Proctor and Gamble.
Summary: This is set in the spring of ( Read more... )

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Comments 7

bsofthewest October 31 2009, 21:43:04 UTC

OMFG that was powerful and well done. I really need to read more of this sooner rather than later.

bluejace October 31 2009, 23:59:06 UTC

These two are so protective of each other, but what they really need the most is to let each other in, they would feel better if they understood the reasons why losing each other is the scariest thing that could drive them to extremes. Great chapter, powerful as stated above.

jennjenn30 November 1 2009, 03:54:03 UTC

This is one seriously intense and wonderful chapter!!!!

tenwinterz November 1 2009, 05:16:38 UTC

Wow, you know you might have thought the home invasion would have been the most vivid part of the story but the aftermath, Olivia and Natalia's emotions, just keep getting more and more intense. Just awesome, dude! Keep it up. :)

azulcorazon November 1 2009, 13:21:18 UTC

This was an emotionally powerful chapter. The depth of Natalia's understanding of Liv's psyche is amazing. She is spot on with what is in Liv's head and it is so believable how well she gets her. I am curious to see if you are going to make Liv's drinking into a long term issue or not. I have the feeling that you plan to go deeper into the "control" fears that this horrific incident has brought up for Olivia perhaps leading to some exploration/healing of emotions from her rape/mothers death. I am fascinated by this story and check regularly for updates. Thank you!

laniecroft November 1 2009, 18:59:44 UTC

Not that I'am a fan or arguments and fights but this was so overdue. It's very good that Natalia found out about Olivias drinking and her nightmares. Natalia is the only one who can break down Olivas walls. Together they can hopefully work out their problems and get over this. And I can't wait for them to finally admit their feelings for each other.
And you better make them sleep in one bed now and the following nights, I voting for that like since chapter 15 xD