Life and Breath Part 23

[altfic]

Title: Life and Breath
Author: Pink Rabbit Productions
Fandom: Guiding Light
Pairing: Olivia/Natalia
Part: 23
Date: 6 October, 2009
Rating: Personally, I'd call it an R, but some might consider it NC-17 at some point.
Disclaimer: The characters and situations belong to other folks far wealthier, more important (or at least with better lawyers), and

Comments

[zephyr_tempest]

...I said next glorious chapter - that was before I knew it was this short.

But oh - what a future it promises.You've brought short and sweet to a whole new level. Now...all we have to do is wait and you'll deliiver, right?

[zephyr_tempest]

K....on second glance, maybe not that short. Sure felt like it though.

[djskyplayer]

It felt short to me too, but I think it's like taking a long drink of water when you're positively parched--just feels like it's never enough. I think another visit to the fertile fountain of altfic's mind is in order. :-) *hinthintnudgenudge* Maybe another update this week?

[bluejace]

Oh they are not waiting till marriage? How interesting... I don't blame them one bit, I know what Olivia was doing but Natalia is making very good points in her head.

[ladyvictory]

Ahhh! Too short! But a very nice tease! ;p

[ceridwyn2]

Oh wow. This was quite poignant. Nicely delving into Natalia's thoughts. Loved the comparisons she made btw actually losing Gus and potentially losing Olivia and what the effects were/would be.

Thank you.

[trexkitten]

Great chapter! But what have the bad guy and Frankie been up to?