Life and Breath Part 22

[altfic]

Title: Life and Breath
Author: Pink Rabbit Productions
Fandom: Guiding Light
Pairing: Olivia/Natalia
Part: 22
Date: 1 October, 2009
Rating: Personally, I'd call it an R, but some might consider it NC-17 at some point.
Disclaimer: The characters and situations belong to other folks far wealthier, more important (or at least with better lawyers), and

Comments

[bluejace]

What an impressive chapter. I kept wanting Holly to find out but I am also ok for that to be a big reveal. I don't know how the 2 of them can stand keeping apart from each other. I just love the way you describe the details in which anyone would notice that they are a couple.

[altfic]

So glad you like. It's currently tortured wanting time. lol. Which hopefully will make the getting that much more intense. That's what I'm hoping for anyway.

As for Holly, somehow I can't imagine things staying secret for too long since she's pretty curious. ;)

[sinjenkai]

come on

[altfic]

Hehe. :)

[ladyvictory]

Okay, um, YAY, more of this awesome fic!

Also, nice curve ball, bringing Holly in as the resort rep. Can't wait to see how this pulls together!

So, yeah, this updating more often thing... good idea! ;p

[altfic]

Glad you like. I enjoy Holly, and she's a fun character to write, so hopefully folks will enjoy her part in the play.

As for updating more often, yeah, it's better. Hopefully, I can do more of it. lol.

[triggerhappy]

Loved this chapter oh so much. Looking forward to seeing more of Holly and her cluing in on just how close they are.

[altfic]

So glad you liked. Holly adds an interesting dynamic to things. Hope you enjoy. :)

[laughsunshine]

Can I guess what will happen?
Natalia goes into the shower...
Please? :)

[altfic]

LOL! The plot bunnies have expressly forbidden me from saying exactly what Natalia's gonna be up to next beyond, she's gonna be up to something. lol.