GL - Movie Night - Part 22

Sep 21, 2009 21:16

Title: Movie Night
Author: critic2000
Pairing: Olivia/Natalia
Rating: PG-13 to start, for violence (non-sexual) and language. I am not any kind of a medical expert so if there are some glaring errors, please forgive me.
Disclaimer: I don’t own the Guiding Light characters, they belong to CBS and Proctor and Gamble.
Summary: This is set in the spring of ( Read more... )

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ragelikeafire September 21 2009, 22:37:28 UTC
Another good chapter. Still on tenterhooks for those longing looks and emotional mind rants to come to fruition.

Thanks for updating so quickly!

Rage out!

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dareisayit September 22 2009, 00:47:35 UTC
ah good...(rubbing hands together) now maybe we can get an idea of what happened through Natalia's eyes and what she saw that made her pull the trigger. Because honestly - I'm having a few problems with that.

And I may be totally out of line - but I'm still hoping that head injury of Olivia's turns out to be a bit more complicated! Just saying... *vbg*

All that being said - very nice plot here Critic! Am truly enjoying the story

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critic2000 September 22 2009, 03:46:07 UTC
"And I may be totally out of line - but I'm still hoping that head injury of Olivia's turns out to be a bit more complicated! Just saying... *vbg*"

OMG you sound like my beta reader!

And I understand about the pulling the trigger bit, I promise that ultimately it will make sense.

I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

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dareisayit September 23 2009, 02:39:29 UTC
Ah... croftlara, yes?

Well then, I shall take it as the highest compliment to be in any way compared to (pulling out and reading from cue cards so helpfully provided by an unnamed source) your intelligent, charming, insightful, always clever, occasionally witty and always-right beta!

(you're mailing my check croftlara, right?)

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trexkitten September 22 2009, 03:23:16 UTC
Brilliant update!

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ceridwyn2 September 22 2009, 05:55:04 UTC
yay! more story. I think it's time for Lillian to bring in a cot or something for Olivia to put in Natalia's room. She knows Olivia isn't going to leave Natalia for any length of time. And Olivia's not exactly been taking care of herself in the sleep department. Me thinks Lillian will talk to Rick and convince him it's for Olivia's benefit and her physical/mental condition that she have a cot in there to sleep on. Otherwise (and I'm not saying I wouldn't want this), we're gonna find Olivia curled up on Natalia's hospital bed with her, especially after one of her nightmares.

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revolos55 September 22 2009, 08:35:30 UTC
Moar!

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