GL - Movie Night - Part 21

Sep 19, 2009 22:21

Title: Movie Night
Author: critic2000
Pairing: Olivia/Natalia
Rating: PG-13 to start, for violence (non-sexual) and language. I am not any kind of a medical expert so if there are some glaring errors, please forgive me.
Disclaimer: I don’t own the Guiding Light characters, they belong to CBS and Proctor and Gamble.
Summary: This is set in the spring of ( Read more... )

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mudpiegirl September 20 2009, 01:34:23 UTC
Not a big deal, but most hospitals have those chairs that let out into a small bed, or if someone is staying overnight they will bring in a cot.

I realize this is hurt/comfort, so things usually don't let up, but it just seems like the staff or Natalia would try and make Olivia more comfortable if she insists on staying.

Other than that, and Olivia's tendency to try and blame herself for everything, which frustrates me, I'm enjoying the story. Thanks

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bluejace September 20 2009, 02:04:39 UTC
One moment of electrifying eye contact, I wonder more about what Natalia thinks about all that.

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lazydevil40 September 20 2009, 08:26:02 UTC
great update, can't wait to see how this plays out... How will Natalia deal with Frank and reliving the nightmare... can't wait for more, update soon please?

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ragelikeafire September 20 2009, 21:44:37 UTC
I'm finally all caught up...

I'm really enjoying this story and lucky for me we now seem to be getting somewhere with their "feelings" and the realization that there might be more than friendship. Looks like I joined the party just in time!

Well done. I look forward to reading more.

Rage Out!

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jennjenn30 September 21 2009, 05:18:10 UTC
Poor Olivia!! I think I was truly feeling bad for her..lol. This, as always, is an awesome story and I can't wait for the next update. It's like a drug now. :-)

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