First fic on passion_perfect

Oct 24, 2007 19:20

Title: Kiss me...not/something about obsessions
Author: Author: Ms. S. E. ("Gargy") Hammond ( Read more... )

women's murder club, fic

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gsrfan7 October 25 2007, 00:45:39 UTC
Love it!

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shatterpath October 25 2007, 16:16:33 UTC
The whole five minutes of this show I've seen, this was the obvious choice of pairings! That was some hot shower sex, yum.

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pibby October 25 2007, 18:57:21 UTC
The girl really was good at what she did and Lindsay wouldn't be able to get rid of her all day long, for that put a smile on the inspector's face.
Love it! Great job :D

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ralst October 28 2007, 11:36:04 UTC
The structure of the story makes it somewhat confusing. Have you tried finding a good beta reader to help with that and the grammar? I'm sure someone on the community would be willing to help out.

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