The girl really was good at what she did and Lindsay wouldn't be able to get rid of her all day long, for that put a smile on the inspector's face. Love it! Great job :D
The structure of the story makes it somewhat confusing. Have you tried finding a good beta reader to help with that and the grammar? I'm sure someone on the community would be willing to help out.
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Love it! Great job :D
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