Comments | passion_perfect: The Inside Fic, Rebecca/Mel

khase_fan09 in passion_perfect

The Inside Fic, Rebecca/Mel

Aug 19, 2009 18:28

Title: The First Taste
Fandom: The Inside
Pairing: Rebecca/Mel
Rating: Mature
Disclaimer: Don't own. Never have. Never will. Although, if I did, I would have done a better job at keeping it than FOX did. Hmph!
A/N: Title taken from the Fiona Apple song of the same name. I advise everyone to check it out. It's sessay. lol. Also, mucho thanks to ( Read more... )

Comments 8

serenitymeimei August 20 2009, 02:56:16 UTC

Mel's right. Damn, that was amazing! *LEERS HARDCORE*

khase_fan09 August 20 2009, 03:08:46 UTC

Hehe, thanks! Glad you liked it. :)

Love your icon, btw. Astrid FTW!

fembuck August 21 2009, 00:37:54 UTC

Mmm, delicious! I love Mel's thoughts, and Rebecca's single-minded determination - which very sweetly gives way to nerves and uncertainty.

They were so awkward together afterwards, but it was so incredibly cute and perfect.

I love these two together! Great job :D

khase_fan09 August 21 2009, 01:11:08 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

lovelorelai August 21 2009, 11:46:20 UTC

I don't know who these characters are but they are hot together! Great writing...really, wow! That was amazing.

khase_fan09 August 21 2009, 13:34:23 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you could still appreciate it even though you had no clue who I was talking about. Lol. That's awesome. :)

cyandragonfly August 22 2009, 07:47:52 UTC

Oh wow. Yeah, very nicely done.

khase_fan09 August 22 2009, 14:00:45 UTC

Thank you! :)