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Otalia Fic: Almost Home

Aug 15, 2009 22:23

Almost Home

Fewthistle

Olivia/Natalia, Ava Peralta

Words: 20,840

Disclaimer: Not mine. They belong, unfortunately, to the less than brilliant folks at CBS, P&G and Telexnet. Were they mine, this would be their world.

Rating: PG

A/N: Well, this began as a drabble. It is now an epic. Over 20,000 words. I have discovered that I apparently have a bit of a ( Read more... )

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Comments 1

columbus150 August 16 2009, 19:27:43 UTC

This was absolutely terrific. I missed the whole Ava/Olivia arc on the show and you more than ably filled in the details. Loved watching Ava banter back and forth with Olivia and loved seeing her test her still new relationship with her. Definitely look forward to the sequel where we can hopefully see Ava and Natalia deepen their relationship.