Life and Breath Part 17

Aug 04, 2009 15:33

Title: Life and Breath
Author: Pink Rabbit Productions
Fandom: Guiding Light
Pairing: Olivia/Natalia
Part: 17
Date: 4 August, 2009
Rating: Personally, I'd call it an R, but some might consider it NC-17 at some point.
Disclaimer: The characters and situations belong to other folks far wealthier, more important (or at least with better lawyers), and ( Read more... )

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vjb2006 August 4 2009, 23:25:23 UTC
"Maybe her mom was only human, but she was more human than any ten people Emma knew."

Best line.

Loved the yearning sense of desired stability from all three of them in this update

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altfic August 8 2009, 19:27:59 UTC
lol. I kinda liked that line, I admit.

Glad you're enjoying. Thanks for writing.

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sinjenkai August 4 2009, 23:57:31 UTC
I love this story

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altfic August 8 2009, 19:44:52 UTC
So glad. :)

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zephyr_tempest August 5 2009, 00:50:33 UTC
Gorgeous. I love your Jellybean - she's a person rather than the loveglue. *hugs her* Adorable chapter - the nightmare scene was wonderful, like what happened but also dreamlike too.

Love that Rafe's going to make an appearance soon. Can't wait. :)

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altfic August 8 2009, 19:47:43 UTC
Emma's fun to write, so I'm glad folks seem to enjoy her take on things. And working on Rafe's first appearance now. Hopefully, I can make things work so he's not quite such a raging jackass like on the show without making him utterly unrecognizable.

Thanks for writing.

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altfic August 8 2009, 19:48:24 UTC
Glad you like. Thanks for writing.

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triggerhappy August 5 2009, 03:10:25 UTC
Love this story.

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altfic August 8 2009, 19:49:28 UTC
So glad you're enjoying. :)

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