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Life and Breath Part 15

Jul 20, 2009 14:55

Title: Life and Breath
Author: Pink Rabbit Productions
Fandom: Guiding Light
Pairing: Olivia/Natalia
Part: 15
Date: 20 July, 2009
Rating: Personally, I'd call it an R, but some might consider it NC-17 at some point.
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meatisadelicacy July 20 2009, 22:18:30 UTC

Still, no idea what's really going down...but I love it.

altfic July 25 2009, 20:36:13 UTC

Glad you like. Not too much longer and at least part of things will become a lot clearer.

ladyvictory July 20 2009, 22:21:43 UTC

"Yeah, it could," Frank mused aloud. "Tweak his ego right...and he'll jump any direction we want..."

Hello kettle...

Fantastic update, as always! Love that Evelyn! ^_^ haha, and poor Olivia, having to go back to Chuckles...

altfic July 25 2009, 20:40:50 UTC

Hehe...I hate to admit, I'm enjoying the not so subtle digs at Frank almost too much...especially since he's so utterly clueless. Bwah!

Glad you liked the update. I suspect Evelyn will pop up again somewhere...and as for Olivia and Chuckles...hehe.

Thanks for writing.

ritarob July 21 2009, 00:16:20 UTC

Yeah,I'm with Ladyvictory on the last line! Oh how I would love to see Natalia and Olivia hold hands at church in front of Fr. Ray. I loved the constant looks between them...more so since we only have tears from Olivia at the moment on screen. Liked Evyln too...it was good to have someone there to support them. I'm really enjoying this storyline..thank you :-)

altfic July 25 2009, 20:44:09 UTC

Many thanks for the kind words. So glad to hear you're enjoying the story.

As for Fr. Ray, I suspect it will only be made plainer to his assholiness that he doesn't get to call the shots in Natalia's life...at least in this universe.

triggerhappy July 21 2009, 01:38:05 UTC

Oh Frank, listen to the words that are coming out of your mouth.

Loved the unity Olivia and Natalia had in church and all the support they're getting from fellow parishioners.
Still not sure what all is going on, but enjoying the ride very much. :D

altfic July 25 2009, 20:49:31 UTC

Heh, Frank's not big on listening skills. lol.

Glad you liked. Wanted to show that there are plenty of Catholics out there who don't think like Fr. Ray.

Things will get clearer in the near future. :)

Thanks for writing.

girlskout2 July 21 2009, 02:05:47 UTC

oooh what a mystery you've created. I don't trust this guy, obviously, since what he did to spook jellybean, but you've got me almost believing Natalia could be Emily.

this is such an original piece. thank u for the frequent updates. i feel spoiled.

altfic July 25 2009, 20:54:43 UTC

Not too much longer and things should get a lot clearer. lol.

Glad you're enjoying. Thanks for writing. :)