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GL - A FEW DAYS AWAY - Chapter 21

Jul 20, 2009 21:00

TITLE: A Few Days Away
FANDOM: Guiding Light
PAIRING: Otalia
SUMMARY: Set mid-friendship, this is a hurt/comfort piece as I'm a hurt/comfort junkie. Olivia, Natalia and Emma decide to have a few days away...hopefully more interesting than the summary suggests. Please request before archiving.
RATING: PG for mild violence
Author's note: This is my first ( Read more... )

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Comments 12

ritarob July 20 2009, 20:26:11 UTC

Me thinking Olivia kind of liked that touching...the poor woman didn't even realise that she'd let out a moan :-) Nice to have a comfort chapter after the pain and angst of some previous ones :-) I look forward to hopefully more comfort in the next chapter :-)

croftlara July 21 2009, 17:06:17 UTC

Hmm... I sure hope I don't disappoint. Is it wrong to say that I find it hard to sustain a level of comfort?

Thanks for sticking with me :)

shaych_03 July 20 2009, 20:39:46 UTC

oh i am loving the little trail of breadcrumbs they're following to love... :)

croftlara July 21 2009, 17:07:25 UTC

Excellent! I'm trying to keep it in context with where they were at that point in time... more crumbs... ;o)

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croftlara July 21 2009, 17:08:27 UTC

Good to hear, just hope my muse leads you where you're hoping it's going to go...

Thanks :)

vjb2006 July 21 2009, 02:48:57 UTC

I find it a little sad that Olivia is so surprised that relative simple touches from someone she cares for could be so wonderfully soothing. Here's hoping she has enough courage to just go with it and accept it for what it is.

croftlara July 21 2009, 17:10:40 UTC

I have several chapters ahead mapped out and sometimes when I read these comments I begin to doubt the journey I've taken the characters on and they have me chewing over what I've written and am writing... I just really hope you like what's to come... ;)

xejanfan July 21 2009, 05:51:49 UTC

nice update! getting your head rubbed has got to be one of the best feelings in the universe! and if nat didn't know how that would affect olivia, she obviously needs a good scalp rub too! *pushing arm up as high as i can* oooh, oooh, choose me! right here! right here! *lifting up in my seat, wiggling fingers* i know how to do it! please pick me!

croftlara July 21 2009, 17:11:41 UTC

Such a willing volunteer - hahaha

I agree, nothing like it, now get in line ;o)

Thanks for reading!