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Life and Breath Part 14

Jul 17, 2009 12:36

Title: Life and Breath
Author: Pink Rabbit Productions
Fandom: Guiding Light
Pairing: Olivia/Natalia
Part: 14
Date: 17 July, 2009
Rating: Personally, I'd call it an R, but some might consider it NC-17 at some point.
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ritarob July 17 2009, 20:04:00 UTC

I'm really enjoying the pace of this story. With Frank behaving as he is, I feel like I need to go have a shower to wash the grime of him off me! Emma is truly her mother's child...despite being upset, when it came to it, she defended both her mommies in true Spencer fashion. Love how she sought out comfort from both her mommies at the end...typical child :-) Look forward to the next installment :-))

altfic July 21 2009, 02:49:06 UTC

Frank's just tooliest tool in the shed. lol. As for Emma, she's a good kid. Even if she gets difficult at times, she's gonna come around and she does love both her moms...and need them. :)

Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for writing.

originaldreams July 17 2009, 20:08:34 UTC

OMG! Who knew Frank could be so creepy not to mention a total psycho.

Update soon!

altfic July 21 2009, 02:53:29 UTC

lol. Frank's definitely...um...yeah...lol

Glad you like. Thanks for writing.

trexkitten July 17 2009, 20:29:12 UTC

Poor Emma! All these !StrangerDanger! attacks and she going to need a new heart as well.

Frank was super creepy. I'm 23 and if someone spoke to me like that I'd run and hide behind my mum also.

altfic July 21 2009, 02:55:32 UTC

Emma might be a little shaky here and there, but she's got a couple of mommies who love her dearly, so she's gonna be okay.

As for Frank...not his finest moment. lol.

triggerhappy July 17 2009, 21:27:14 UTC

Wow, this was intense.
Love that Natalia and Olivia have an ally at the Church in Evelyn.

Poor Emma. :(
Between Barron and Frank, she's never going to trust the police again.

altfic July 21 2009, 02:58:02 UTC

Glad you like. I didn't initially plan Evelyn. She just sort of appeared and ordained she was needed...and who am I to argue? lol.

Yeah, Em's having a hard day, but she's resilient.

laughsunshine July 17 2009, 21:35:25 UTC

God I love this storyline.

altfic July 21 2009, 02:59:20 UTC

*smile* So glad you're enjoying. Thank you for taking the time to write. :)