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Life and Breath Part 13

Jul 13, 2009 21:16

Title: Life and Breath
Author: Pink Rabbit Productions
Fandom: Guiding Light
Pairing: Olivia/Natalia
Part: 13
Date: 13 July, 2009
Rating: Personally, I'd call it an R, but some might consider it NC-17 at some point.
Disclaimer: The characters and situations belong to other folks far wealthier, more important (or at least with better lawyers), and ( Read more... )

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sinjenkai July 14 2009, 04:26:22 UTC

Just lovely

altfic July 17 2009, 20:02:39 UTC

Glad you like. :)

xejanfan July 14 2009, 05:17:21 UTC

gosh, this is a great story! it's sweet, angsty, mysterious and all kinds of good. i can see we're starting to get back to where this whole journey started in the first chapter, but i imagine there's still a whole lotta angst between here and there and afterwards.

i look forward to chapters and learning what the hell is going on with that creepy cop! post fast please *batting eyelashes*!

altfic July 17 2009, 20:22:38 UTC

So glad to hear you're enjoying. I kinda wanted to do something a bit different from most of what I've seen out there, so it's been cool to see folks having fun with it.

As for angst, yeah, there's a bit to come, though hopefully balanced with some lighter and very loving moments.

Past that..hehe...the plot bunnies won't let me say a thing (nasty little slave drivers).

triggerhappy July 14 2009, 05:34:22 UTC

Gorgeous.

Lost in each other and the moment, neither of them thought to check the stairs in order to note the small figure that crouched there, listening with sharp ears and hurt eyes.
Uh oh...

altfic July 17 2009, 20:25:02 UTC

Glad you like. :)

It's Emma. She's not a total doof like Rafe. She'll figure it out and be okay.

arista_artisan July 14 2009, 08:21:20 UTC

Oh, poo! You just had to pull that stunt with Emma. JB is way too cool to act like that bratty criminal Rafe. Girl, you're the love glue. Hold firm!

Speaking of Rafe, Frank really should be checking out his records too since he thinks Rafe's an accomplice (and screwing his mommy, eww).

Nat taking all of 5 minutes to accept Olivia's proposal (wat?) is so OMGZ! EMILY, YOU GUYZ! anvilicious. She's not! But I want to know why/how. Which means I really want to know Barron's motivation. It appears he's going after Liv or Nat. Frankenputz is just a dull tool, per usual. I don't which I like better the Otalia schmoopieness or the crime/mystery drama going on. Can't wait for the merge!

altfic July 17 2009, 20:39:52 UTC

Have faith. She's still a kid, so she's gonna have her moments, but she's also Olivia's kid, so...she's gonna have her moments. lol.

Rafe will be addressed.

LOL! Well, the schmoopieness and the intrigue will both be continuing, so hopefully you'll enjoy. As for the merge, it's beginning to happen...slowly...like those left lanes that just gradually fade away. lol.

meatisadelicacy July 14 2009, 08:32:22 UTC

Aww, they're getting married! So cute, and I can't wait for more.

altfic July 17 2009, 20:57:27 UTC

Hehe...yeah, they rate high on the cuteness index. lol.

Thanks for writing.