GL - A FEW DAYS AWAY - Chapter 18

[croftlara]

TITLE: A Few Days Away
FANDOM: Guiding Light
PAIRING: Otalia
SUMMARY: Set mid-friendship, this is a hurt/comfort piece as I'm a hurt/comfort junkie. Olivia, Natalia and Emma decide to have a few days away...hopefully more interesting than the summary suggests. Please request before archiving.
RATING: PG for mild violence
Author's note: This is my first

Comments

[xejanfan]

yay for updates, give us more soon, please! i love this story and the way they woke up together was brilliant, so i'm kind of jonesing for more. thanks in advance!

[croftlara]

Hi xejanfan, I'm glad you're enjoying this, more updates to follow soon, just smoothing out the kinks :)

Thanks for reading!

[vjb2006]

Your beta was quite correct. The duet of rumbling tummies was very cute as was Olivia trying to work out how to just ask for more snuggles :)

[croftlara]

Haha...don't tell my beta though, I'll never hear the end of it ;)

I hope you will continue to enjoy - turns out there's quite a bit more to go...eek!

Thanks for reading!

[auriflamme]

This is my first time commenting on this story, though I'm not sure why...I'm completely loving it. Despite the earlier injuries and delirium shenanigans, I feel somewhat soothed by your chapters...maybe it's just because I'm commenting after reading this, the calmest chapter, or maybe because it's away from all the relationship angst on the show and elsewhere...either way, I'm really glad you continued.

I even love that it's mostly still at the friendship level. They're becoming so comfortable with each other and that just feels...nice?

And ditto on the comment above...Otalia waking up together, all snuggly, is the most adorable thing ever. :)

[croftlara]

Well, it's nice that you thought to comment at all, I appreciate it and am delighted that you're loving it.

I hope, bearing in mind that this is a hurt/comfort story and the muse has apparently decided there's a way to go, that you continue to enjoy it.

As much as Otalia is the endgame, I personally love the earlier, almost innocent way they interacted with each other and I hope that continues to come out in this story.

Thank you again for commenting and for taking the time to read it :o)

[kissmychakram]

Aw, snuggly waking up Otalia is all kinds of cute, thank you.

Whilst I'm generally a contrarian, I urge you to continue doing what your beta tells you to do.

Thanks!

[croftlara]

Hey kissmycharkram (that sound less like a salutation and more like a put off - have I mentioned yet I love your name?)

Glad to see you're still following this little story of mine and resisting my own contrary nature, I will take your advice... which should mean another post soon - yay! ;o)

Thank you for reading!

[jay00789]

Aww growling tummies! Cute! Loved it! More soon please!

[croftlara]

More to follow - I promise... just feel I should advise that as a hurt/comfort story it can't stay cute for long but should always get back to cute eventually...

Thanks for reading - I hope you enjoy the future chapters...