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Life and Breath Part 10

Jul 05, 2009 18:42

Title: Life and Breath
Author: Pink Rabbit Productions
Fandom: Guiding Light
Pairing: Olivia/Natalia
Part: 10
Date: 5 July, 2009
Rating: Personally, I'd call it an R, but some might consider it NC-17 at some point.
Disclaimer: The characters and situations belong to other folks far wealthier, more important (or at least with better lawyers), and ( Read more... )

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triggerhappy July 6 2009, 01:48:42 UTC

Update, Yaaaay!

that she'd chosen Olivia not for any superior appeal or attraction, but simply because Olivia had been rich and dying and he'd been poor and healthy.
Ummmm, Frank? Didn't she choose Olivia over you after she was no longer dying?

And I am so curious about what exactly Barron's angle is; it's seems unlikely it's a case of mistaken identity with all the manipulation he's been doing. Plus, whatever he had planned for Emma. *waits impatiently for more*

altfic July 9 2009, 20:56:47 UTC

Depends on how you're viewing things, I think. One could certainly argue that if Nat had targeted Olivia, she did so when Liv was still ill and vulnerable.

As for Barron...hehe.

Glad to hear you're enjoying. Hope you like the rest of the ride. :)

wonkots42 July 6 2009, 01:55:04 UTC

I am very intrigued. Frank is such a clueless patsy, it's almost sad really.

altfic July 9 2009, 20:57:46 UTC

And the humorous part is that one doesn't even have to write him out of character to make him that way. lol.

tabfan19 July 6 2009, 02:11:07 UTC

Just a quick note to say how much I'm enjoying this story -- and how happy I am you've taken to writing Otalia fic!

This twist is REALLY good. Frank is being played for all he's worth, but the question is: why? And who's Barron? and why do Olivia and Natalia have to get married?

Looking forward to the twists and turns to come!

Than you for writing it and sharing it!

altfic July 9 2009, 20:59:21 UTC

Many thanks for the kind words. They're always really wonderful to read.

As for Barron...revelations to come. lol.

Hope you continue to enjoy. :)

trexkitten July 6 2009, 02:42:03 UTC

Excellent. I can't wait to see where this is going.

altfic July 9 2009, 21:00:03 UTC

Hope you continue to enjoy. Thanks for writing.

mercurychkita July 6 2009, 02:54:59 UTC

Sweet! This is such a neat premise. There are just so many questions: Just who is Natalia Rivera, does she really love Olivia (the answer had better be 'of course'!), what's the deal with this Barron dude... I look forward to discovering the answers!

altfic July 9 2009, 21:10:55 UTC

Things will continue to be revealed...with some pretty major stuff pretty soon.

As to Natalia...whatever else, have no doubt, she loves Liv with all her heart.