Beautiful and Cruel [PG]

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Title - Beautiful and Cruel
Fandom - Guiding Light
Pairing - Natalia/Olivia
Warnings and Spoilers - Spoilers for June 15th - 18th. Angst. Very Natalia-centric.
Summary - Natalia sees herself in everything else. One-shot
Rating - PG

Notes - I honestly have no clue about this one. I don't like it. Bleh.

Comments

[rhyfeddu]

Yeah! I missed your short stories! We were getting so spoiled there for awhile. ;)

No 'Bleh' here. Loved your turning the "Beautiful and cruel" line on God. Nice that.

I admit a little confusion about the last lines. Are they meant to refer to Rafe when he finds out about her and Liv?

[uselessmarks]

I am glad that the 'bleh' is just my own. Thank you! :D

Now, which lines got you confused? :) 'Coz she is literally looking at herself in the mirror, trying to not cry or think about how Rafe doesn't accept her love for Olivia... and she is trying not to think of Olivia and how much she wants the woman.

But in the bigger scheme of the very last line, these are her thoughts right before she leaves town. That was my premise.

Make a little more sense? :D

[rhyfeddu]

Yep. That did it. :)

I was mixing up the references to Liv and Rafe a bit there at the end. I knew they were in there, but I had them muddled, so I got myself confused. LOL

Thanks for the clarity. :D And sharing your efforts and talent, too!

[uselessmarks]

Hehehe, not a problem. I love to share what goes on my little brain in regards to Otalia and my fics. ;)

Thanks so much for commenting on my stuff! It is most appreciated. :D

[ladyvictory]

Wonderful, as always. So painful!

[uselessmarks]

Thank you very much! :D

...Although, should I be so thankful for causing such pain? lol

[sinjenkai]

Nicely done

[uselessmarks]

Thanks!

[ndasky1]

Painful and sad. *sniff*

Great writing, not "bleh" at all.

[uselessmarks]

Thank you very much! Glad the 'bleh' was only in my head ;D