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FIC: Crossroads Part 9/20; Guiding Light

May 23, 2009 00:27

TITLE: Crossroads
AUTHOR: Wonko
FANDOM: Guiding Light
RATING: PG for this part
SUMMARY: Natalia needs to make a choice between her past and her future.
TIMELINE: Begins immediately after the episode on the 12th of May and goes off into its own little world at that point.
DEDICATION: This is dedicated to the memory of badtyler, a great writer and an even ( Read more... )

guiding light

Comments 62

Great!!! brina42 May 22 2009, 23:42:54 UTC

Oh the drama, more please?? :-)

Re: Great!!! wonkots42 May 23 2009, 09:13:17 UTC

Thank you! More as soon as I can.

shakesdarklady May 22 2009, 23:50:40 UTC

I don't blame Olivia for being so self-depricating... she is so used to having the rug pulled out from under her.

Great update! I cannot express the little squeak of joy that escapes from my mouth when I see you've posted an update!

Shakes

wonkots42 May 23 2009, 09:13:41 UTC

Yay, I love squeaking! ;-)

Thank you.

drumstikkgirl May 22 2009, 23:52:30 UTC

I love sarcasm, it's ironically so truthful to a person's feelings, and every word spoken by Olivia is practically saturated in it!! I love it, thank you!!

otalia4life May 23 2009, 01:27:01 UTC

i totally agree

wonkots42 May 23 2009, 09:14:34 UTC

Me too!

wonkots42 May 23 2009, 09:14:06 UTC

Sarcasm is absolutely my mother tongue. Thanks!

ceridwyn2 May 22 2009, 23:53:18 UTC

Olivia's got to learn to shut up sometimes. I swear the stubbornness in her makes her stick her foot in her mouth more times than she can think. Yes, she's been hurt before. But ya know what, Olivia, Natalia telling her mother she's in love with a woman immediately following the death of her father, not good timing. Especially since Nat's mother's never approved of anything she's done.

Love your writing. Keep it up. :)

potatoko May 23 2009, 02:22:17 UTC

Word. Plus, she's going to tell her mother who threw her out at the age of 16 for getting knocked up? Really?! I mean, that's just unreasonable.

wonkots42 May 23 2009, 09:16:35 UTC

I mean, that's just unreasonable.

Yeah, Olivia's going to figure that out before too long, never fear.

wonkots42 May 23 2009, 09:15:45 UTC

Olivia's got to learn to shut up sometimes.

Yes, she'll be regretting that little outburst before too long methinks.

Thanks!

vjb2006 May 23 2009, 00:01:29 UTC

Poor Olivia - so sure she's not to be valued and so easily undercut by Doris. Now she's gonna go dig herself into that hole a little deeper, isn't she?

wonkots42 May 23 2009, 09:16:52 UTC

Little bit, yeah ;-)