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ladyvictory in passion_perfect

Otalia Ficlet: One Step Forward

May 10, 2009 01:14

Title: One Step Forward ( Read more... )

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sinjenkai May 10 2009, 05:38:29 UTC

Oh My!

ladyvictory May 10 2009, 17:19:22 UTC

Ha, I hope that's a good thing. ;p

Thanks for reading! ^_^

novak_benson May 10 2009, 05:43:27 UTC

Squee! That was made of adorableness. Loved this. Very awesomely written. Thank you for sharing it. :D

ladyvictory May 10 2009, 17:20:01 UTC

Haha, aw thank you! I'm glad you liked it. ^_^

Thanks for reading.

alexriley May 10 2009, 06:18:57 UTC

Oh my god hahahahha. I love badass, annoyed, take charge Natalia. Trying not to laugh out loud because of Olivia's own naïveté is nearly impossible. Haha I really love the amusing aspects in your writing :)

ladyvictory May 10 2009, 17:21:30 UTC

Haha, it's my goal to get people to laugh/snort aloud, so, yay! It's just a matter of frustrating Natalia until she snaps, lol. Glad you liked it, and thank you for reading! ^_^

random_zombie May 10 2009, 06:44:08 UTC

Definitely not bad. Good fic. Very good fic. Thanks for sharing. :)

ladyvictory May 10 2009, 17:22:05 UTC

Aww, thank you! I'm glad you liked it. ^_^

kiranerys101 May 10 2009, 07:12:55 UTC

Hee. So amusing! Love how Natalia accuses Olivia of not reading her signs correctly. Heh. Poor Liv, she doesn't stand a chance, does she?

ladyvictory May 10 2009, 17:23:22 UTC

Ha, well, Olivia likes to be purposefully obtuse when it comes to Natalia sometimes. And no, she doesn't stand a chance. ;p

Thanks for reading!