[Fic] Fantasist (Maru+Subaru/Yoko)

Nov 06, 2008 01:44

Title: Fantasist
Pairing: Maru/Yoko, Maru/Subaru, Subaru/Yoko (um, kind of)
Rating: R
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction.
Warnings: K8 Hospital AU. XD (If you are unfamiliar with the concept, here's some background.) Maru's imagination.
Notes: I FAIL SO HARD. D: I thought I'd practically finished this weeks ago. Just a few more hundred words, I ( Read more... )

maru/subaru/yoko, maru, yoko, subaru

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airairo November 6 2008, 06:18:45 UTC
OMG MARU YOU FILTHY DIRTY PERVERT LSDKGJKD ♥

But slkdflkj um WHO CAN BLAME HIM. *____* AUGH I love how one of the perks of his job is that he gets to go to the hospital a lot *dies* and OMG HOW MUCH DO I LOVE NURSE SUBARU SLDKGJD Augh, I'm having comment anxiety because I feel like anything I can say is totally inferior to how much I LOVE THIS. *____*

OMG THE KIMIKO/SUBARU BITCHINESS XDDD AND MARU'S ELABORATE LESBIAN FANTASIES that aren't deterred much when he finds out they are dudes and I love how he's not entirely convinced with Subaru. XDDDD And that aside with patient Yasuda really very desperately needs to be written.

Maru squirms: he knows he’s a pitiful figure. Just the tones of their voices, the way he’s being owned by a pair of cross-dressers - but Maru can’t get enough.

Oh, Maru. ♥♥♥ This is too completely perfect. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. AND I LOVE YOU. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

Thank you. *___________* And oh my god DOES THIS EVER NEED A SEQUEL. XDDDD

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elyndys November 6 2008, 22:17:32 UTC
I am just sorry it was so rushed in the end! D: D: D: Just... pretend it was better in the places where it failed, OK? XD I'm so glad (and relieved XD) you enjoyed it!! ♥ Lol I don't think Maru would be put off by them being guys - if they were up for it, I'm sure he wouldn't say no. XD When he's not thinking about them, he's thinking about Dr Murakami anyway! >;D

Lol I do think there needs to be a patient Yasu installment too. :3 But i'd rather read it than write it! ;9

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molkita November 6 2008, 13:53:28 UTC
I'm really, really loving all these Hospital AUs ♥
Clearly there should be more of it ♥ I agree with Alissa! Patient Yasuda needs to be written~

And I LOVE this fic! Nurse!Subaru and Nurse!Kimiki are so hot I could never blame Maru for fantasizing about them x3

Aw, Maru is too precious ♥

I fail at commenting, but I just wanted to tell that this is very awesome and is surely asking for a sequel. ;D

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elyndys November 6 2008, 22:52:56 UTC
Haha, the hospital AU is a brilliant playground. >:D I'd love to see patient Yasu vs Nurse Subaru... oh no, now I think I'm remembering an idea I had for it ages ago... as if I don't have enough unfinished stories! XD

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! ♥ I actually really enjoyed writing Maru! He's naughty, but in a sort of more endearing way than Subaru, haha! Thanks for commenting, I'm really pleased you liked it!

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molkita November 7 2008, 03:51:11 UTC
Not fair! xD I want to read a fic with that Yasu vs Nurse Subaru idea of yours! Maybe when you get some free time? *pokes*

I really like the way you wrote Maru x3
He was indeed quite endearing, even if lost in naughty fantasies! xD
I wouldn't mind a sequel whith him meeting up with the "girls" while not injured and not at the hospital! Heh

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sisterjune November 6 2008, 16:11:16 UTC
I DEMAND A SEQUEL. A FILTHY ONE. 8D

and nice to see you've finished a fic! ^^ but what happened to stripper!baru smut D: it was brilliance! XD well hospital AU is fun too, it has kimiko <3

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elyndys November 6 2008, 22:47:49 UTC
Hehehe, I'd love to see it! >;D

I still have the stripper Subaru story! In fact, I even 'finished' it - but, like so many of my stories, there was a gap in the middle. :/ I lost my confidence about making it actually good. :< But as it's nearly done, I really should cross it off the list, shouldn't I? ;)

Glad you like this one anyway! ♥ Thanks a lot!

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silentchord November 7 2008, 02:24:46 UTC
First off. HOSPITAL AU <33333

Your Maru was absolutely adorable despite his dirty dirty thoughts that happened to included Dr Murakami briefly too, which is just ljlki;bks' awesome because you know Maru wouldn't care about that little thing called gender. Hotness is hotness. But hey, who can blame him, when Nurse!Subaru and Nurse!Kimiki are treating him and being so damn sexy whilst doing so.

Loved it~<3

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bananachipu November 7 2008, 03:39:04 UTC
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*________* I LOVE THIS. omg, don't make me feel guilty about having no time to continue drawing the pages. XD BUT BUT

"Subaru stares at her. “I’m not the one seen coming out of a supply closet just after Dr Murakami.”

Kimiko actually looks smug at that. “Well, he obviously has more taste~,” she says archly.

Maru’s jaw almost drops. Not only is he surprised she’s not protesting in any way (he’d expect this sort of reaction from Subaru, but not Kimiko!), but he’s also suddenly presented with the mental image of her with the really rather handsome Dr Murakami. He smacks even harder than Kimiko, and with a clipboard too sometimes, but he always laughs at Maru’s jokes, and he has beautiful hands. Maru can’t help it, now - the picture just comes into his mind against his control, of them all over Kimiko, sliding up her thigh and under her uniform…"I'm sorry, I just.. eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ( ... )

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