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parka_girl

The Other Side

Jul 03, 2007 22:22

Title: The Other Side
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: This is not real, this never happened. I don't know them and this is all fiction. Made up stuff.
Author's Notes: Takes place Monday night and is the sequel to Clarity.

( they always come back. sooner or later )

fernando torres, soccer, daniel agger

Comments 14

miomeinmio July 4 2007, 03:58:20 UTC

*flails*

It's lovely. I've probably read your last one twice (once when it was posted and then again because I was all, Ouw! What's this? because I have the memory of an 86-year-old), but this one is so much more emotional. I think it's beautiful, and isn't it strange, you have the opportunity to write a sequel? The way you write these two (all your pairings, actually, but I digress) is very intimate and charming, almost, because they have real character to them, and it's very natural.

Love it.

hoppipolla July 4 2007, 05:40:30 UTC

I like this. I could see them working actually. I loved your last one and I love this one.

une_risette July 4 2007, 07:47:31 UTC

Mmmmm... so many freckles ♥

tarmenel July 4 2007, 23:09:22 UTC

OH MY GOD I LOVE YOU AND THIS COMMENT SO MUCH. LOL. ♥

une_risette July 5 2007, 02:59:32 UTC

And I forgot something: THE TATTOOS *faints*

tarmenel July 5 2007, 03:18:39 UTC

OMG YES THE TATTOOS. AND FRECKLES. AND.... THE SHAVING THEIR HEADS AT RANDOM TIMES FOR NO REASON? LOL!

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tarmenel July 4 2007, 23:09:00 UTC

Um.

Wow.

Perfect dialogue. Perfect description. Perfect elaboration. Perfect.

I....

Yeah.

Coherent much?

txorakeriak October 1 2007, 20:00:39 UTC

OH MY GOD. *breathes deeply* That was intense, and steaming hot too. *fans self* Wonderful, poignant writing, perfect dialogues. I could see them in front of me. Am slightly incoherent, so forgive the rather short comment, but I really loved this. *adds to memories*