Can't buy me love

Jan 12, 2014 09:42

Title: Can’t buy me love ( Read more... )

love hurts, atwt, fff, pg, : !author|artist: parishs, luke, reid

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scotianova January 12 2014, 09:58:24 UTC
...a new storyline is born???
I am definitely waiting for more to come ♥♥♥

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parishs January 14 2014, 06:10:02 UTC
thanks for reading. not a very happy start..

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amyafa January 12 2014, 14:42:41 UTC
I like the foundation on witch this story starts.

Luke mature, holding a job, living not with his mummy.

But yeah he has lost himself and is very sad and at rock bottom.

That means the only way is up from here.

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parishs January 14 2014, 06:11:03 UTC
o my, I love your optimism!
thanks for your comment.

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writergirl2006 January 12 2014, 19:25:08 UTC
Oh man, this broke my heart. Luke is so, so down--here's hoping he finds something to give him hope again.

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parishs January 14 2014, 06:12:19 UTC
o yeah girl, he is going to be happy. but it may take a while, i write this for the fff's only, and as before I have no plan, so we'll see where this ends.
Thanks for reading.

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lure007 January 12 2014, 23:51:58 UTC
If I wasn’t this numb, I would panic, because of the lack of control that I feel. Maybe my brain plays tricks on me. Or protects me against something.

The human body sure is a wonder... often a coping mechanism in itself: keeping us grounded or shutting us down when no other option remains feasible.

Sometimes, a person just needs to let themselves fall -- all the way to the dark, hard, concrete bottom -- before they can resume the journey up the steep slope that is this life.

Looking forward to seeing how the story develops. xx

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kccalgal January 14 2014, 04:18:56 UTC
Poor Luke!

You have written his sadness so well. I can feel him just going through the motions of living with no emotion or joy. Any kind of feeling takes too much energy for him so he is numb.

Looking forward to where you are going with this.

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parishs January 14 2014, 23:24:44 UTC
Hi Lure007 and Kccalgal, can;t seem to reply to both of your comments, I can just do it for the two of you....wwhhaahh LJ!!!!
But anyway, thanks for reading!

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parishs January 14 2014, 23:19:57 UTC
haha, thanks for reading.
He will get there, but I think I am going on a very slow pace with this story.

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