Numb3rs Fic: Iridescence, 7/10 - Prodigal Son (Liz, OMCs, PG) (Color: Lilac)

[paranoid_woman]

Title: Iridescence, 7/10 - Prodigal Son
Word Count: 690.
Characters: Liz, OMCs.
Rating: PG.
Warnings: None.
Spoilers: None.
Summary: Connor hasn’t mentioned someone else would join them for dinner tonight but then again, her older brother likes surprises.
Disclaimer: I don’t own Numb3rs.
Betas: The fantastic twins_m0m.
Previous chapters: Find them here.

Comments

[magisterequitum]

Ahh, Liz. I like this. Family is important and it's not often that we get to see family outside of the Eppes one.

Wonderful job, PW.

[paranoid_woman]

That's what I was thinking. People mostly write about the Eppes men, which is cool since they are the main characters, but I think we need more family stories that are not focused on them.

Thank you. :)

[mustangcandi]

I second every thing Magi said above. I would love to see more of Liz's family... but at least we know something about them. Seeing David or Colby's family would be made of awesome.

I'm so glad you wrote this little insight into Liz's world, PW. This was very well done. You should be proud of the work you're creating. *hugs*

[paranoid_woman]

at least we know something about them. Seeing David or Colby's family would be made of awesome.

That's exactly what I think. I'd love to have that in the show.

Thank you. I am proud but sometimes it's very hard for me to see if I'm doing things exactly the way I want them. Ah...

[mustangcandi]

sometimes it's very hard for me to see if I'm doing things exactly the way I want them

I think that is the curse of all writers. That is why I have such a hard time writing. I see the scene so clearly in my mind that it's very difficult to translate it into words. I like to be descriptive but I am also realizing brevity is a great tool to have as a writer. Seems, at least for me, these two things do not go hand in hand. LOL.