Comments | paranoid_woman: FIC The Connections Series, Part 1/? (Charlie/Colby, PG)

paranoid_woman

FIC The Connections Series, Part 1/? (Charlie/Colby, PG)

Mar 25, 2008 10:39

This is a series that I came up with this morning. I don't know how many chapters I will post, or how often, it depends on the responses I get. Comments and critics are equally welcome, as long as you don't throw stones at me. Now, seriously, I really hope you enjoy it, because I am a big fan of Numb3rs. Please forgive my English if it's not too ( Read more... )

numb3rs fic, pairing: charlie/colby, genre: slash, series: the connections series

Comments 18

irena_adler March 27 2008, 20:08:36 UTC

Very sweet and I can feel Charlie's frustration here that his math isn't working. I'm looking forward to reading more.

(BTW, you used 'rest room' when I think you mean 'break room'. In American English, rest room is where the toilet is.)

I'm honored paranoid_woman March 28 2008, 03:03:46 UTC

I was sooo happy that you left a comment, because I am addicted to your journal. It started a few months ago, when I found it by accident, and I couldn't stop. I love everything you write.
So I'm honored to have your comment here, and I am happy to know that you will keep reading my stories, if you'd like to. I'll be posting new chapters everyday, if I can.
And thanks so much for the advice about the break room and the rest room, I was very confused about it, and I was somehow sure that it wasn't right. Any comments like that are obviously welcome.
Thank you soooo much for being there.

irena_adler March 27 2008, 20:09:48 UTC

P.S. Any particular reason you chose to screen your comments? People like to read what other readers thought, too. :)

Please, some advice paranoid_woman March 28 2008, 03:00:45 UTC

I think I have solved that a few seconds ago, but if it didn't work, please-please-please leave a comment telling me so.
I love to read other people's thoughts when I look for fanfiction, I know what you mean. And I want you to be able to do it, but I'm still learning how LJ works.
So if the problem still exists, please tell me how to find a solution. I would be sooo grateful.
Thanks again for everything.

boymommytotwo March 29 2008, 08:52:09 UTC

i am _all for_ a new charlie/colby series!!! i like the premise... that's always the part that impresses me the most b/c i think it takes such creativity to come up with a good one... and the way you sent colby in there was really good.

please do continue!

Good paranoid_woman March 29 2008, 16:26:17 UTC

I'm glad you liked the premise, and yeah, it's hard to come up with one that leaves a nice feeling when someone reads it.
I'm also happy that you think that Colby's actions (an reactions) are good, because these are my first fics about Numb3rs... in fact, these are my first fics ever. And it's difficult considering I'm from Latin America and my english is not perfect, but I'm doing what I can. BTW, I have a new beta, so I'm sure the story will continue to improve.
Thank you for reading. It's very important for me.

ladygray99 March 30 2008, 18:49:16 UTC

Hey, welcome to Charlie/Colby land. :-) The story is good so far especially for a self translated piece. Keep going.

numb3rsfangirl March 30 2008, 20:37:37 UTC

Really enjoyed your story and you got all the charries right. :) Looking forward to reading more of your fics. :)

paranoid_woman March 30 2008, 22:06:24 UTC

Thank you very much. I'll keep posting, maybe almost everyday, and I hope you read what's coming next.

anonymous March 31 2008, 23:34:09 UTC

This was a great start. Keep up the good work. As a Colby / Charlie fan, I like to support writers who are willing to tackle the job of coming up with and writing stories.

Twins' Mom

paranoid_woman April 1 2008, 00:10:11 UTC

Thank you!
Of course, you can keep reading up to Part 4, but tomorrow I will probably upload Part 5 too.