FIC: The Connections Series, Part 15/?, "Unexpected moves" (Charlie/Colby, PG-13)
First, I wanted to thank everyone who has been sending me messages to talk when I was sad. Thank you! You made my day get so much better!
I also wanted to thank everyone who has friended me or friended me back during last week. It's really nice of you...
Chapter 15! It was pure hell to work with action scenes, especially in English. I tried to use ( Read more... )
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loved it
nice work it was so into it
I could so see this scene take place
I kept on jumping in my seat reading it and shrieking
loved the song great work
I seriously jumped when colby jumped infront of Charlie, I thought he got shot nice twist
These guys need to get it together soon
The ending really broke me poor charlie.
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cant wait for more
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This was fantastic. I could imagine every bit happening. I have to say I was waiting for Colby or Charlie to scream out that they slept together.
Even though I don't like her I totally agree that Amita has gone through enough. I hope she has gone now though. I have to say I can't wait for Don to find out because I think he is going to be furious, only because that is the reason his home got blown up.
I have to say I totally feel sorry for Charlie. I want to fluff his hair and give him a huge hug. The guy seems to be able to do nothing right.
Okay essay over. What do you think A*???
As ever can't wait for more!!!:-D
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This chapter took me days, everything happens so fast that it's hard to keep up with every detail. I'm very happy that you liked it.
And yes, Amita's had enough. When I started to recap everything she has gone through, I was like "OMG I totally tortured her, I can't kill her now, it's too much," so I'm glad that you agree with me.
Don's response coming soon, I promise. :D
I agree with the poor Charlie thing. He's so messed up! However, I think that would be his natural response. Things will change soon anyway, I can tell.
An A*!!! YAY!! *lots of happy dance* I feel like I just graduated. :D
Thanks a lot for being there!
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I suppose you are right that maybe Amita has been put through enough, although I must admit,a mini dance of glee did occur when she was grabbed again...and Charlie, Charlie, Charlie. What was he thinking when he grabbed the gun. Was waiting with bated breath for him to get hurt and for complete Colby meltdown, I just wanted to shake some sense into the pair of them. Am intrigued as to how they will get together...you are going to fix them? Charlie just needs to be brave and go for it. Looking foward to more.
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I know people would have LOVED IT if she was dead by now, and that people joined into a HAPPY DANCE when the kidnapper had her... Don't worry, she's not going to be around for a while, she needs lots of time to recover from all she's been through. :)
About "shaking some sense into the pair of them", now this is what's coming next in this series. It's time for Charlie and Colby to decide what the hell they're going to do, whether people know about them or not. So I promise that definition will be up here very soon.
Thanks again for leaving a comment here! I'll respond to every single thing to say, I'm all for the feedback! And coffee too... ;)
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If you'd like, send me a private message, and if it's necesary, I'll give you my e-mail adress. Would that be ok? :)
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http://webmessenger.yahoo.com
And now I've read this chapter... it's... wow. Well done, absolutely fantastic!
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I've just logged in following the link, so you can contact me if you want. :)
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- "I'll show you what's smooth" (linked to The Connections Series)
- "The result of all changes" (a Colby fic written for a challenge at savecolby community).
I don't know if you'll consider those interesting, but well, here they are. :)
And again, thank you very much for reading. There will be more Connections Series this week.
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