Comments | paranoid_woman: FIC: Iridescense, 1/10 - Dusty Light (Colby, PG) (Color: White)

paranoid_woman

FIC: Iridescense, 1/10 - Dusty Light (Colby, PG) (Color: White)

Apr 18, 2009 15:52

Title: Iridescense, Part 1/10 - Dusty Light
Characters: Colby.
Word Count: 581.
Rating: PG.
Warnings: None.
Spoilers: None.
Summary: This is a secret, nostalgic place of Colby’s mind, one that he consciously tries to avoid.
Disclaimer: I don't own Numb3rs.
Betas: The fantastic
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numb3rs fic, genre: gen, series: iridescence, character: colby granger

Comments 11

devon99 April 18 2009, 19:56:47 UTC

Oh sweetheart, that was so lovely. Why on earth you were stressing last night I'll never know. This was perfect and so wonderfully described that I could almost see those particles floating down through golden sunlight.

Perfect ♥

paranoid_woman April 18 2009, 21:31:51 UTC

Well, this wasn't the piece I was stressing about yesterday... It's a AU series I'm working on, which will probably be the next long series I'm going to post. It's not so hard, but for some reason it's driving me crazy. Hahaha.

I had a very nice time at the coffee shop today and was able to clear my head. I wrote Iridiscense a few weeks ago, as the ideas had stayed with me for a while. I'm glad you liked it. The particles are something I've kept with me my entire life, they make me feel at home for some reason and I always wave my hands to see them move. They're magical to me. :)

Thank so much for reading, you made me smile!

shanachie13 April 18 2009, 20:10:28 UTC

Oh I love this. What a perfect way for Colby to come to terms with his choices! Totally awesome!

And if ya wanna keep up with my fics...add this: http://shanachie-quill.livejournal.com/

And I need to go fix stuff on it...cuz otherwise it's gonna annoy me *grumbles* but I'm trying to ignore it for now cuz I wanna do some writing today.

paranoid_woman April 18 2009, 21:33:14 UTC

Things kind of merged in this story - the shirt, the stains, Colby's life. I really enjoyed writing it, so I'm very happy that you had a good time reading it. Thank you!

I've friended your journal already! Looks great!

I hope you get some time to write today. *g*

shanachie13 April 19 2009, 00:13:47 UTC

They did...and it worked out awesomely! I greatly enjoyed it!

Kewl! I haven't returned the favor since I'm still signed in to this one.

Well, so far no...but I'm still semi-hopefully. It hasn't been a good afternoon since I messaged you earlier.

mustangcandi April 20 2009, 12:14:02 UTC

*happy sigh*

We just don't get enough general Colby fic like this.

I loved every moment... and I love this secret, nostalgic place in Colby's mind. I want to see more, even though he tries not to think about it.

Another job well done my dear. *hugs*

paranoid_woman April 20 2009, 12:30:21 UTC

Thank you, hon. I wanted to capture a little moment here and I'm glad it worked for you. *hugs back*

clwilson2006 April 21 2009, 19:46:23 UTC

I'm a little behind on my reading, but as always I make room for your stuff, this is amazing. you just get better and better. I love how this made me feel, I've been so damned fluffy and romantic lately (must be love!) I'm off to try chapter two. can't wait for the other colours.

paranoid_woman April 21 2009, 20:45:50 UTC

Hey, love is good!! I'm so happy for you! *g*

I have a particular feeling every time I write about that dusty light. It's pure magic to me. Thank you for your kind words.

Take care! *sends millions of hugs*

rubynye April 29 2009, 18:27:23 UTC

Oh, Colby, you deserve muffins and all good things!

This looks like it's going to be a fascinating, atmospheric series. I really look forward to reading the rest of it.

paranoid_woman April 29 2009, 18:29:52 UTC

Colby deserves everything! *throws confetti*

Awww, thank you for the kind words. *hugs you tight*