Comments | paranoid_woman: FIC: In the Arms of the Wicked, 21 (Don, Liz, OMC, mention of Charlie/Colby, PG-13)

paranoid_woman

FIC: In the Arms of the Wicked, 21 (Don, Liz, OMC, mention of Charlie/Colby, PG-13)

Feb 17, 2009 18:57

Title: "Playing with Fire"
Series: In the Arms of the Wicked, Part 21/?
Characters: Don, Liz, OMC, mention of Charlie/Colby.
Rating: PG-13.
Spoilers: None.
Warnings: Mention of rape.
Summary: Don catches his ghost.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything (characters, situations, etcetera) except my OCs.
Beta: The fantastic twins_m0m.
A/N: lillyg, this chapter is ( Read more... )

genre: slash

Comments 23

Author Speaking: Mmm... paranoid_woman February 17 2009, 21:01:42 UTC

So this is not all for the rest of the week. Chapter 22 will be posted tomorrow! Yay! I have it here, betaed and ready to come out.

I have deep feelings for these chapter. For Liz, for Don... Ah, Cameron knows!

Oh, and... *looks up at picture* Yummy, huh?

*sends hugs*

- PW.

Re: Author Speaking: Mmm... mia_dcwut_09 February 18 2009, 01:02:39 UTC

Oh, and... *looks up at picture* Yummy, huh?

o yes gis very yummy indeed
I think he's perfect for cameron
agh the don and liz conversation so heartwrenching

Re: Author Speaking: Mmm... paranoid_woman February 18 2009, 01:36:00 UTC

Yummy. Benjamin Bratt is hot. But that's not the most exciting part - I get the feeling I'm going to love writing this character. He's going to stay, like Dr. Farrow and one more OC I really like from this story.

I thought you were going to like that Don-Liz conversation. :)

Ah, but now Cameron knows about the tapes! He knows about Charlie and Colby, he knows about David and about Amita! So much fun... for me and hopefully for the readers.

You're a sweetheart. Thanks for being so supportive. *hugs*

Re: Author Speaking: Mmm... mia_dcwut_09 February 18 2009, 01:38:18 UTC

He is
o my I just cant wait to read what your lil mind conjures up but I know it will be great

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devon99 February 18 2009, 18:46:23 UTC

Wonderful.

“I don’t want him to be like me. I want him to keep that special someone he has. The last thing I want is people to get between them.”

“Maybe they’re stronger that that.”

The idea penetrated Don’s ears and hit his brain and his heart. Suddenly, he could see flashes of the way his brother looked into Colby’s eyes, how he’d stood up to the entire family to claim his love for him. It was good for Don to remember how Colby reciprocated and how he’d supported and waited for Charlie to make his decision.

I loved this little bit, made me want to squish Don tightly.

Look forward to more.

*hugs*

paranoid_woman February 18 2009, 20:36:59 UTC

Thanks so much for pointing out what caught your attention the most. I'm glad you liked those lines! *g*

i want to squish Don, too. Thank you for reading and being so nice to me... *hugs you tight*

devon99 February 18 2009, 20:42:02 UTC

Hugs you back. I loved that little bit. It was such a brotherly thing to say, that he wanted Charlie to have a special someone, but it was so sad that he said - I don't want him to be like me....*sniffles*

btw - did you nominate my cabin fic at the numb3rs awards too sweetie?

Made my day:)

paranoid_woman February 18 2009, 20:57:12 UTC

Well, so far in my story, Don hasn't been with anyone, and the entire universe is supposed to be set during season 4 *but* before the Robin era. So it seemed to me that he'd still be doubtful when it comes to him being in a relationship. That way, he really wants Charlie to be happy. *g*

Yes, I did. I loved how you built all the tension and then made it all suddenly go away with the last line. It was wonderful.

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harknessgirl February 19 2009, 18:22:11 UTC

This is an amazing chapter! I loved it.
Don found the ghost but didn't get the tapes.
I have to say I think everyone will be okay generally. Well I hope :-)
Loved it, off to read chapter 22. *g*

paranoid_woman February 19 2009, 18:29:04 UTC

You hope! But not everyone will be okay. *g*

Wheeee!

*hugs you tight* Thanks so much for reading...