The Connections Series, Part 12/?, "Voices on the speaker phone" (Charlie/Colby, PG-13)

[paranoid_woman]

The Connections Series is back! YAY! **claps like crazy**
So now we enter the second half of the story. Everybody will have an important role, especially Don and Alan. Not telling you anything else. You'll have to read!! ;)

One little thing, though. I'm having college exams since last week, so it's a little difficult for me to post every other day

Comments

[shadeof]

Ups... Megan came in baaad time... ))
Interesting, how she will react?

[paranoid_woman]

You'll find out soon!
Glad you're still there to read the second half of The Connections Series! You made me very happy with your comment. Thanks!

another

[anonymous]

not another (groan)
o man not another cliffy (pout)

loved how it played it very natural
i should hit colby nah.... if he let charlie answer the phone they would be in this situation but then again who can blame him.

I loved how Megan had an idea of what was going.
cant wait to see how it plays out

-mia

ps. if you get this twice sorry but apparently it didnt post the first comment i put up and ill try to start on breathe today

Re: another

[paranoid_woman]

I know, I know... I'm cruel, as always. But that will make you enjoy what's coming!
As you pointed, I wanted this to happen naturally, that's basically my goal, to make this "a natural progression", a reader called it once. I want things to flow properly to the point of the story I mean to take the characters to.
And about the call... well, how could Colby know that Megan was actually COMING to the house? He was too much focused on Charlie and everything that was going on there in that room... ;)
And Megan is a profiler, remember that. She can read people like the palm of her hand.
Glad you enjoyed!

[cyndilc]

Oops!
I think maybe Colby should of let Charlie answer his phone. I loved it can't wait for more these cliffies are killing me.

[paranoid_woman]

Well, that's why the cliffies were invented...
A very interesting reunion will take place the night the characters are in, still Friday night. I think this second part of the series is better than the first... but well, you my amazing readers will be the ones to judge that. :D
Thank you so much for reading! I can't believe that there's actually people waiting for new chapters. Just... freaky. In a good way, of course. :D

[harknessgirl]

WOW are you on a roll of what with really good fanfiction at the moment or what??? What a cliffhanger!! I love how already Charlie and Colby want to be with each other so much they will put the phone down on other people. As ever can't wait for more. I have to say I am crossing my fingers that Megan reacts well to the situation but this is the land of fanfiction anything could happen. Aliens could land and the sky could turn green. :-D

[paranoid_woman]

You always make me flush with your comments! :)
I love it that you like so much the story...
I don't know if I'm on a roll, because I came up with this chapter almost a month ago (when I was beggining with this series). Of course, I got to write it a few days ago.
I know, I work with cliffhangers on every single chapter. But that's part of the fun! :D
Yes, pretty much everything can happen. Some people might think they know what's going to happen now that Amita's kidnapper is free, but hell, no. They don't know. I'm trying something different this time. :D
Another cliffhanger, this time in a comment. I'm shameless. ;)

[harknessgirl]

Cliffhangers are great I love em. I am probably the only person that does.
ooooo you trying something different!!! Can't wait. I am smiling so much thinking about what could happen I am getting very funny looks I am going to have to try and calm down LOL!! Good luck with the next chapter.

[paranoid_woman]

Oh hon, try to calm down!! LOL!
Yeah, I'm trying something different. Hope it works... :)
It's kind of what I did in chapter 11 of The Connections Series, you know, top!Charlie and bottom!Colby in their first time ever, being both virgins. I'm trying to renew Charlie/Colby stories a little. :)
Thank god you like cliffhangers. :D

[anonymous]

I know Colby and Charlie are a bit passionate at the moment, but it's a bit hard to believe that Colby wouldn't allow Charlie to answer the call from Megan. It could be regarding a new case, and Colby would know that. Given that he did stop Charlie, he's gotten them into a bit of hot water. Megan and Larry will be amused, I'm sure, but Don and Alan... Love the cliff hanger (again). I will patiently wait for the next story because as much as I like to read them, your exams are more important. One fix - I think you meant her lover instead of his lover since it was Megan talking about Larry.

Twins' Mom

[paranoid_woman]

Thanks for the fix! :)
And I know Colby made a mistake, but hey, Charlie didn't complain too much, did he? ;)
However, you're right. Even if they weren't passionate at the moment, they should have answered the call, since Amita's kidnapper is free now. This will lead to big problems in the next chapters, both for our two boys, Don and everybody else.
My next exam is on Monday night. I think I'll post chapter 14 on the weekend if I can, and then the next one on thursday or wednesday. Let's see how my studying goes... :) I'm at the moment holding the markers and typing like crazy, but I'm pretty sure it will be alright. Thanks for being patient...

[paranoid_woman]

I meant I'll post chapter 13 on the weekend, not 14... sorry. :)