Comments | paranoid_woman: FIC: In the Arms of The Wicked, Part 2 (Colby/Charlie, Megan/Larry, Ian, David, PG-13)

paranoid_woman

FIC: In the Arms of The Wicked, Part 2 (Colby/Charlie, Megan/Larry, Ian, David, PG-13)

Nov 20, 2008 05:02

Title: "The India case"
Series: In the Arms of the Wicked, Part 2/?
Characters: Colby/Charlie, Megan/Larry, Ian, David, mention of OMC.
Rating: PG-13.
Spoilers: None.
Warnings: None.
Summary: There are memories David, Colby, Megan and Ian can't let go.
Feedback: Yes, please. :)
Disclaimer: I don't own anything (characters, situations, ( Read more... )

genre: slash

Comments 15

Author Speaking paranoid_woman November 20 2008, 13:09:05 UTC

As you can see, I'm slowly introducing the OMC by giving you little, little clues about him. I don't think his arrival would be as nice as I think it will if I didn't do this ( ... )

harknessgirl November 20 2008, 13:51:56 UTC

This is amazing xD
I love it. I am glad you posted today *grin*
I love the little bits of information you are giving us about your OC, he seems like he is going to be a very interesting character.
OMG Ian has a dead lover. aaaawww my poor baby *hugs him*
He needs some happiness.
Can't wait for more.
*hugs*
Love you xx

paranoid_woman November 20 2008, 14:01:35 UTC

I love the little bits of information you are giving us about your OC, he seems like he is going to be a very interesting character.

We'll see it he turns out to be what everyone expects him to be (I mean the readers, not the characters, LOL). I'm working on the first time he appears in the story... that will be chapter 3, by the way. :)

OMG Ian has a dead lover. aaaawww my poor baby *hugs him*

I still don't know if she was his lover, so I'll let the story flow and let Ian tell me what she meant to him. Still, I have this strong feeling that the story has incredible potential. *nods*

Hehehehe, thanks for every single word you said. You made me very happy!!!! Love you, too!! *sends lots of hugs*

*sighs dreamily about the fic her dear friend harknessgirl sent her last night* GUH.

harknessgirl November 20 2008, 14:22:48 UTC

*grins* Would you like more fics dreamy fics???????

I am already writing one LOL. Im addicted putting you in the story. I was considering asked you if I could post it on here, but I dont think its thats entertaining to other people expect you and I LOL.

Can't wait for more of your story *g*

paranoid_woman November 20 2008, 14:37:39 UTC

*grins* Would you like more fics dreamy fics???????

Don't you know the answer already? ;D ... *g*

I am already writing one LOL. Im addicted putting you in the story.

XD

I was considering asked you if I could post it on here, but I dont think its thats entertaining to other people expect you and I LOL.

Hahahahaha. I just sent you an email about that. :)

Can't wait for more of your story *g*

There will be more next week... *evil laugh*

*sends more hugs*

falconoflight November 20 2008, 15:32:08 UTC

OMG it hurts soooo good. The Ian bit was a surprise, but a lovely one. and all the hints to your OC. simply fun.

*hug* I want to hug them all. because they're broken and nobody able to fix themselves from the "India Case". At least not yet.

I look forward to the next part. *hug*

Falcon

paranoid_woman November 20 2008, 15:39:58 UTC

OMG it hurts soooo good.

Eeeeee! I love bittersweet fics. *g*

The Ian bit was a surprise, but a lovely one

It was a surprise, even I was like "Wow, this is niiiice." Hahahahaha. It came to me while I was writing and I'm slowly figuring out what it means to Ian. :)

and all the hints to your OC. simply fun.

Well, I want you imagine how he might be like before I throw the OMC at you. That will make it a lot more fun. *g*

*hug* I want to hug them all. because they're broken and nobody able to fix themselves from the "India Case". At least not yet.

I couldn't agree more...

Sweetie, I can't believe you're still commenting on my fics, I'm so happy. I appreciate it so much, since I know you're not that used to it. THANK YOU. *hugs you really tight*

twins_m0m November 20 2008, 21:17:29 UTC

This was a tough chapter to read because it was just so sad. Everyone seems torn apart inside. And Ian has a dead lover! I'm interested in that back story as well. I hope the gang pulls together in the end. I'd hate for them to never feel the sun's warmth. Great job (even though I felt teary afterward). Good luck on finals!!

paranoid_woman November 21 2008, 00:29:43 UTC

This was a tough chapter to read because it was just so sad.

I can proudly say that my OMC's mission is to bring a little bit of humor and awkward moments to the team and everyone else. You'll see what I'm talking about soon. :D

And Ian has a dead lover! I'm interested in that back story as well.

I don't know if she was her lover... well, no, that's not true. I know who she is, I figured it out during one of my classes today... Still, I'm keeping the secret until I have Marah and Ian's story line well developed in my head. But I can promise you it will be very interesting (I think). :)

I hope the gang pulls together in the end. I'd hate for them to never feel the sun's warmth.

Aww... I know...

Great job (even though I felt teary afterward).

That's ok, because things are VERY slowly going to get better... and then you'll cry because of the joy. ;D

Good luck on finals!!

Thank you!!

Thank you for everything! *hugs*

devon99 November 21 2008, 18:06:42 UTC

A wonderful piece of writing sweetie.

I loved this, quite possibly more than any other chapter in this series.

It was quiet and subdued and reflective and carried a real emotional depth which I loved.

Nice idea to include Ian as well.

Really well done.

paranoid_woman November 22 2008, 00:13:29 UTC

Well, I'm glad you liked it... it's always nice to hear what you think of what I write. :)

It was quiet and subdued and reflective and carried a real emotional depth which I loved.

That's what I was going for.

I really like the Ian story line - I hope I can develop it the right way.

Love you. *big hugs*