Comments | paranoid_woman: FIC: Holding on to a lie, Part 21 (Colby/Charlie, Amita, Liz, Ian, Alan, Don, OMC, R)

paranoid_woman

FIC: Holding on to a lie, Part 21 (Colby/Charlie, Amita, Liz, Ian, Alan, Don, OMC, R)

Oct 21, 2008 17:33

Title: "Safe from harm"
Series: Holding on to a lie, Part 21
Characters: Colby/Charlie, Amita, Liz, ian, Alan, Don, OMC.
Rating: R for violence.
Spoilers: None.
Warnings: None.
Summary: Amita really knows how to use a knife.
Feedback: I love it, yay! :)
Disclaimer: I do not own Numb3rs or anything related to it. But I do own any OCs.
Beta: The ( Read more... )

genre: slash

Comments 32

Author Speaking paranoid_woman October 22 2008, 00:41:06 UTC

Yay, new chapter!!! *dances*

I'm so stressed out and busy... but I'm so happy at the same time because somehow every time I get a few minutes I can write a little bit more. :)

Ah, I liked writing this fight between Liz and Amita. I also enjoyed Ian, who in my head is actually having a problem with shooting the crazy woman. And Alan... oh, Alan. Poor, poor man. *facepalm* But he loves Charlie and he'd do anything to save him.

Oh, and as you can see, there are only 5 chapters left... so enjoy! The countdown might be evil to some of you, but I can't help it. ;D

Hehehehe. *tired evil laughter*

Take care,

- PW.

tyler_logan October 22 2008, 01:08:22 UTC

How excited I am to come home from work and find this update waiting for me on my f-list!

LOVED this installment! And of course, I can't wait for more!

Please tell me that you are going to resolve the David situation soon! It really hurts my lil' heart!

paranoid_woman October 22 2008, 01:26:47 UTC

How excited I am to come home from work and find this update waiting for me on my f-list!

Cool! I never know if I should post at night... no idea why. :)

I'm so glad you liked this chapter!!! *dances*

And don't worry about David. I will resolve his situation... although... well... Nope, I can't talk about it. You'll have to wait. *g*

*evil laugh again* Heehehehehehehehehehe. *rubs palms*

Thank you!!! *sends hugs*

tyler_logan October 22 2008, 06:09:45 UTC

And don't worry about David. I will resolve his situation... although... well... Nope, I can't talk about it. You'll have to wait. *g*

You are so evil! You know I'm dying here, right? A slow and painful sort of death!! :D

*curls up in the corner to die*

Lucky for you, I like ya! So I'll let it slide, as long as you promise not to make me wait too long!!

paranoid_woman October 22 2008, 10:36:47 UTC

Hahaahahaha, you're so funny! *falls of chair laughing*

*curls up in the corner to die*

*curls up beside you to help you survive*

The David situation is going to change, but I can't tell you if the new context is going to be good or bad for him. ;D

JI won't make you wait too long. Remember, there are only 5 chapters left! :D

And again, I'm so glad you're enjoying the story...

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shanachie13 October 22 2008, 01:53:55 UTC

Not a comment for the story cuz I don't think I've actually been reading this one...but did you actually get the smut this time? If not...I'll resend it tomorrow from the email account that does work...

paranoid_woman October 22 2008, 10:34:28 UTC

LOL, yeah, I got it, I just haven't had the time to actually read it the way I should in order to give you my notes. :)

I hope you don't mind if I do it this weekend. You had until November 1 to write it, if I'm correct...

I'm so sorry I'm not being really fast at doing things lately. I hate being so busy with school. :(

charleseppes October 22 2008, 14:33:47 UTC

You do realize that I have the tendency to quit reading stories that have Amita in them for to long, right?

paranoid_woman October 22 2008, 15:44:02 UTC

Um... I thought you used to do that because you really don't like her, LOL.

But what does that mean, exactly? That if I don't kill Amita or something you'll stop reading? ;)

charleseppes October 22 2008, 15:51:30 UTC

I can handle only so much of her. LOL I'll probably still read it, but I really can't stand her. I believe that you have her attitude down pat and it's that type of attitude that turns me off. *shrugs* That's just me.

paranoid_woman October 22 2008, 15:59:56 UTC

Ah, first, thanks for saying that you think I have her attitude down pat. :)

Second, if you can't stand her in my story, I don't really have a problem with it, she's not a favorite character in the fandom, she's not even MY favorite. And even if she was, readers are free to have their own feelings about her. As a result, they are free to come and read and/or comment or not.

So, you know, I'd love it if you kept reading, but if you really can't handle her attitude and you decide to stop reading, then that's ok. I don't want anyone to read anything they don't really like. :)

*hugs*

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callisto24 October 22 2008, 16:40:34 UTC

Uuuh! Ian is so coool! I trust him to bring them all out alive. Amita too. *gg*
And Alan is so nice and cute.
Thanks for updating! :)

paranoid_woman October 22 2008, 16:47:05 UTC

Uuuh! Ian is so coool!

He is, isn't he? I didn't really want him to break in and solve the situation. There's a lot more here than what he's used to when he works with Don's team. People he likes are involved. :)

Alan is nice and cute, you're right. He is just the perfect father...

And thank you for reading this story. It really means that much. :D

*hugs*