FIC: American hero, Part 2 (Colby, various OMCs, PG)

Sep 19, 2008 19:07

Title: American hero, Part 2
Characters: Colby, various OMCs.
Word Count: 300.
Genre: GEN.
Rating: PG.
Warnings: None.
Spoilers: None.
Summary: Sometimes different generations fight about the past, the present and the future.
Written for: savecolby 's September Challenge (Colby's birthday) and numb3rs100 , prompt #128 - Bug.
Beta: The adorable mitfordgal.
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genre: gen, numb3rs drabble

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Comments 18

Author Speaking paranoid_woman September 20 2008, 02:14:00 UTC
Late post, tonight!

I like this drabble because Colby's father and his grandfather have different opinions about war, and I wanted to show that in a little story.

I picked up the idea of the bug story from the streets last week. A grandfather was with a little girl and she asked if ants had the right to live. The old man told him that of course they did, and the girl smiled so widely I couldn't help but turning that little moment into a fic. Thanks to the people who gave me the idea! *g*

Yeah... I wasn't very creative in this one. Hope it's worth reading, though.

No idea how many parts there will be, by the way. But hopefully, I'll get to write them before the end of the month, before the challenge ends. :)

Take care,

- PW.

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Re: Author Speaking shanachie13 September 20 2008, 02:45:28 UTC
My eyes are literally crossing, hun, so I printed this off to read, in hopes that paper would be better than computer screen. If not I will read it tomorrow and email/LJ text you then.

Yes, I have an eye appointment. Yes, I am aware I need new glasses.

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Re: Author Speaking paranoid_woman September 20 2008, 12:35:51 UTC
Don't worry about it, it's ok!

New glasses? Yay! *g*

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Re: Author Speaking shanachie13 September 20 2008, 22:34:21 UTC
Yes... the doctor said "You need new glasses" I was like "d'oh" I've needed new ones for like two years, but my last ones were like 500 bucks so I kept putting it off...today they were only 128! So happy! I will get them in 7-10 days...

I read it... I liked it. Can't wait til Colby gets older. I loved the ant story. I think there was one part where you miss used a pronoun, but I can't remember where.

Hey, off topic of this--any suggestions for a title for my story? I can give you a heads up on what's going to go wrong if you need...I'm ready to post part one..but it needs a title.

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emmademarais September 20 2008, 03:07:42 UTC
Lovely little story. It's a shame his father didn't win this battle.

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paranoid_woman September 20 2008, 12:37:01 UTC
Yeah, but... he's got little Colby, and that's all he cares about. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Thank you for the lovely comment, Emma. Your words are always very much appreciated. *hugs*

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paranoid_woman September 20 2008, 12:38:26 UTC
*blushes* I'm honored that you liked what I did here. :)

Thank you for reading and commenting, my dear! *big hugs*

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mustangcandi September 20 2008, 14:29:19 UTC
*sighs* I'm very anxious to see where this goes. I am really enjoying the insight from the Granger men before Colby. Three generations of Granger's... that's a beautiful thing. Keep posting. :)

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paranoid_woman September 20 2008, 14:43:06 UTC
I thought talking about previous generations and how they dealt with war would be interesting. Besides, this will make Colby become who he is today. :)

Thank you so much for reading, sweetie. You know I can't help but responding to your challenges. *g*

*big hugs*

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mia_dcwut_09 September 20 2008, 15:56:37 UTC
aww thats cute
i love Little!Colby
so adorable
you're giving me blot punnies gis
cant wait for more

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paranoid_woman September 20 2008, 15:58:20 UTC
Then write down those bunnies, work on them, I want to read them! *g*

Thank you for the lovely comment!

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mia_dcwut_09 September 20 2008, 16:16:10 UTC
lol i should shouldnt I
i just need time

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