FIC: Holding on to a lie, Part 16 (Charlie/Colby, Amita, Larry, Alan, R)

Sep 16, 2008 09:46

Title: "Fighting against a stranger"
Series: Holding on to a lie, Part 16
Characters: Charlie/Colby, Amita, Larry, Alan.
Rating: R.
Spoilers: None.
Warnings: None.
Summary: Who rolled down the stairs?
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genre: slash

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Author Speaking paranoid_woman September 16 2008, 12:52:13 UTC
And the winner is... theazndragon!! She thought Amita and Charlie had rolled down the stairs together and let me know about it in chapter 15. :D

It was so much fun, so interesting, to see what every one of you thought would happen. Thank you so much for getting so excited about the story! *g*

I've got so much more for this fic. Is anyone up for more action, angst and insane!Amita? LOL!

There could be another chapter this week. :)

Take care and have a good day,

- PW.

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charleseppes September 16 2008, 14:12:44 UTC
Alright! Don and David finally arrive! Go get her boys!! *waiting patiently for the next chapter*

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paranoid_woman September 16 2008, 14:28:37 UTC
Go get her boys!!

LOL... But will it be easy for them to do that? *evil laughter*

Thanks so much for being so patient and for all your support! *g*

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devon99 September 16 2008, 20:24:17 UTC
Noooooooooooooooo.... you ended just as the cavalry arrived!!

Another fantastic action packed chapter, this really is edge of the seat stuff.

Am hoping for more crazy Amita and even more limp Charlie, lol, is it wrong to want to see him hurt?

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paranoid_woman September 17 2008, 01:10:43 UTC
is it wrong to want to see him hurt?

God, no!! It's actually great!! *g*

I've got more insane!Amita and more hurt people in the next few chapters. :D

Thanks so much for all the compliments, they mean a lot... *hugs*

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byrons_brain September 16 2008, 20:26:01 UTC
::trembles:: oh this is so exciting & scary.... looking forward to the next chapter...

Hurry Don!

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paranoid_woman September 17 2008, 01:15:57 UTC
Hurry Don!

Don's there, David, too. Now... will that be enough to stop Amita? *thinks* Noooo. *evil laughter* *giggles at the thought of the scared look on the readers' faces*

I'm very glad I can provide you a story you can enjoy. Thank you for the lovely comment, sweetie! *hugs*

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anonymous September 16 2008, 22:13:56 UTC
Oh, no!! Another cliff hanger. I'm not sure who is more evil, Amita or you ;). (I hope you are doing well on your mid-terms).

Twins' Mom

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paranoid_woman September 17 2008, 01:18:35 UTC
I'm not sure who is more evil, Amita or you ;)

Now, the fact that you ask me that strangely makes me happy, LOL. Yeah, I know I'm evil... but I haven't been as evil as I can be yet, in a fun way... to me, of course. ;D

I'm doing well on my mid-terms, not amazingly great because I took too many courses and classes, but I'm handling it as much as I can. Thank you so much for asking.

I appreciate it a lot that you're still reading and reviewing, it's very much appreciated. :D

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